This is very good! Simple and descriptive without being complicated and boring. I would say you are doing an excellent job, my friend!
Too cute! Absolutly adore it! Fili and Kili are awesome!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your very kind reviews! I greatly apppreciate all feedback - particularly when it's positive! :) I am so happy you like my stories! I am very much enjoying your story Boom Box Beat, and I look forward to your future updates! Thank you again, T.E. :)
Wow. Eowyn sounds dangerous at the end there. This was amazing! Very descriptive! I like it!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! :) I wanted to show her fiercer side that we see in the battle of the Pelennor Fields when she fights the Witch King to defend her Uncle. I've always really admired Eowyn and I do think they portrayed her as slightly too weepy in the films. But thank you so much for reviewing and I'm so happy you liked it! :)
I am totally intrigued and ready for this! It sounds like an amazing story and I simply cannot wait for more! I have seen a few stories where they throw vampires into Middle-Earth, but I never wanted to read them. This one, however, surprised me and, I must say, I love the style! This is gonna be good! I cannot wait for more!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review! I am glad that you have found this story interesting and are wanting to continue reading it, it means so much to me as a writer! I hope to have a chapter up about every week, hopefully you won't have to wait long for the next one! Thanks again Aralinn
Wow! I love it! It is a much more plausible and understandable way of putting a modern day girl into Middle Earth! I love the originality! It's different! I cannot wait for more!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review and I'm glad that you like it and find it original :) I hope you continue to like the upcoming chapters! Aralinn
Wow, I like how this is starting off. A lengthy chapter with well-placed descriptions and a good introduction to the characters. About said characters, even though the 'dead parents' thing is typical, they seem quite intriuging! A very hilarious mixture and I just LOVE Elladan and Elrohir's roles! Hurray for Elrond's sons! Also, I love the style of writing how it feels like we are actually there and someone is pointing out what is going on instead of one person just reading about it. Fabulous! Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thank you! I appreciate the honest review! I do understand that no parents is kind of cliché, but hopefully I can make it work. And I was so upset at the absence of Elladan and Elrohir in the movie that I just had to give them a role! It is a new style of writing that I am trying then what I usually see and I'm glad you like it so far! I hope you enjoy the next chapter!