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Angel In The Ashes by calatheil Rated: PG-13 [Reviews - 5]

Haldir is Lothlorien's pride, arrogant and stubborn.So When Mandos takes pity on a young woman in the 21st century and give her a second chance of life all seems well. Only there is a catch, the woman will not remember who she was, she will be a new person living a new life. Then Mandos's plan begins to go wrong and the woman he had plans for, ends up in Lorien with a dark secret, a hidden past even she is not aware of and life at stake. It will take more than Haldir's reputation to overcome the problems she face's and his feelings for her. If only he knew it was not simple.
Categories: Book-verse, Movie-verse Characters: Celeborn, Galadriel, Haldir, Orophin, Rúmil
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Drama, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort, Mystery, Romance, Tragedy
Warnings: AU (alternate universe), Character Death, First Draft, Torture, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 5007 Read Count: 2523
Published: 19/02/13 Updated: 30/12/13 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Secrets of a Dreamer Reviewer: SouffleGirl Signed
It's a short introduction, but I'm curious to see as to where this is going :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing. A lot of the story's i write have short introductions :D The chapters usually get longer throughout the story!!
Date: 19/02/13
Title: Angel In The Ashes Reviewer: SouffleGirl Signed
There are some typos here and there. I feel that you are rushing the story. Maybe make your chapters longer..
Looking forward to where this is going

Author's Response: I will check the typos soon, i will make the next chapter longer the first too are just background information... Thank you for your review :D
Date: 22/02/13