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Of Mabrand, the Axe of Lossarnach. by gregja21 Rated: PG [Reviews - 1]
Summary: A tragic tale of war, love and loss concerning the life of a man of Gondor at the end of the Third Age. Mabrand is the heir of Lossarnach, one of the largest Fiefdoms of Gondor. This tale follows him from his youth in the Vale, through the War of the Ring, and the subsequent military campaigns of Elessar in the early Fourth Age. My first fic. Enjoy!
Categories: Book-verse
Characters: Original Character
Genres: Fantasy
Warnings: Character Death
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4033 Read Count: 319
[Report This] Published: 29/01/13 Updated: 10/02/13
Reviewer: ItalianGuy235 Signed
Date: 30/01/13 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter II: Of Mabrand's Youth.

This is a very good story. You give a lot of detail to the scenery and the characters which is good and it is very sad and had me on the verge of tears for the boy's lost mother. Keep writing as I would like to see how the story unfolds. Five stars. :)

Author's Response: Thank you for your kind review! I really wanted it to come across as a tragic piece, so it's good to see that's working well. The next chapter will be up soon. :)