I love Kaitlyn. She's a real person caught up in life-changing situations, doing the best she can to cope with it and, in addition, fight her own fears. I absolutely love this story, can't wait to read more!
Wow! I've been reading this story for a couple of days (I'm slow, I know :P) and I'm loving it. Off to read the next chapter!
Wow, thank you! I know what you mean about the first chapters. I don't know if it only happens to me, but I always struggle to get through them. This story was a bit different than the ones I wrote before... It goes pretty much to the point straight away *LOL* Previously I always rambled on and on until I got to the point. I'm glad to know that you like the stoy, and in return, I promise to try to post any new chapters soon, ok? Thanks again!
Thanks ElfShampoo! It makes me really happy to get reviews from new readers, specially if they liked the story ;P I'm glad you liked it!
That end is DEFINITELY a cliffhanger! :P
I've been reading this story for the past two days, and I really, really, enjoyed it. I've been planning to write a Kingdom of Heaven related story and this story has given me much inspiration. Thank you so much for writing and sharing it with us here... I'll definitely look for the sequel, since you got me very intrigued now. :D
Yay! Another Kingdom of Heaven author! There aren't very many of us around, and we need more. :) Thank you vey much for the review. I am glad you enjoyed the story. The sequel should be up shortly.
When you start your story, can you drop me a line? I'd love to see it.
Oh, God... this is really, really different from the other story I read that you wrote. I've only read the Prelude, but there's such emotion in it, I can't wait to read the rest. I'm intrigued and I'm also touched by what the character is going through. I'm glad I finally made myself the time to read this. Expect more reviews soon!
Why do I have the feeling that Orlando letting Mike drive away will have more serious consequences than he imagined? This is such a good story, I'm thoroughly hooked. It's been a long, long time since I was this captivated by a story, and knowing there's a lot more to come is great. You know that feeling when you want to finish a good book to see how it ends, but at the same time you want it to last? That's what's happening to right now. Great work!
Okay, this Ashley girl? She means trouble. And serious trouble. I think I instantly disliked her. I hope Orlando doesn't fall for her tricks, but...
Great job so far!
Author's Response: Thanks for your comments. I had mistakenly posted the title for Part Two of this story so now it has its proper title. Yes, Ashley is a trouble maker in more ways than one.