This is really good! I felt sorry for him, keep up the good work! :D
Author's Response: thank you very much! I didn't know my story was that good
I really liked this, i especially liked Legolas's "It must be faulty" joke, i look forward to reading the rest!
Author's Response: Aw I'm so glad you liked it! :D I hope you will enjoy the rest, once I post more! :)
I'm not entirely familiar with skyrim but this is an excellent story, well done :)
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review. :) It's an incredible game.
I love how you use the opening and the plot is really good :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
This is Really good!!! It deserved more reviews and reads than it has. Well done on a fascinating piece of writing :)
Author's Response: I'm very happy that you like my little tale. It hasn't been up very long, so maybe it will get more reviews and reads in the future. Thank you so much for your kind words.