Penname: EnchantessM [Contact] Real name:
Member Since: 08/11/11
Membership status: Member
Bio:
I work as a freelance editor in RL. I also localize medieaval browser based games (not going to name drop though! J). I'm a huge LOTR fan and especially like fan fic involving Legolas, Haldir and Glorfindel (not together though! I don't like slash. On the other hand, I enjoy well-written Mary Sue and OC romance type stories). If you're looking for a beta, I'll be happy to oblige - send me an e-mail. :)

Oh and shameless promotion, check out the latest vid I uploaded to YT: Elvish Love (Rose of Sharon Instrumental) http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=G5Wp0gx4WNc

Beta-reader: Yes
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Down The River Anduin by ToriLee Rated: NC-17 [Reviews - 36]
Summary: When Cory Blair is called into work in the middle of the night, she finds herself staring at the body of a man who looks like he bounced out of a Medieval Fair. And this time, he's alive.
Categories: Crossovers
Characters: Boromir, Original Character
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Drama, Erotica, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Warnings: AU (alternate universe), First Draft, Graphic Sex, Rape, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 36247 Read Count: 6278
[Report This] Published: 16/08/12 Updated: 02/05/13
Reviewer: EnchantessM Signed
Date: 31/08/12 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Montpelier

A delicious lime and background all in one - thanks for that!
Looking forward to your next installment. :)

Author's Response: I try... XD But thanks for the review

Thicker Than Water by ToriLee Rated: NC-17 [Reviews - 15]
Summary: Selene would do anything to protect her little sister Raleigh who was painfully shy, and avoided confrontation. Gabriella was the spitfire who aided Selene in all of their crazy acts. But Alley, was the bully. What happens after the four girls get older and swear a blood pact? A pact, so pure and tight; that a little side trip couldn't even break it...right
Categories: Book-verse, Movie-verse, Crossovers, Off Topic
Characters: Aragorn, Arwen, Bilbo, Boromir, Celeborn, Denethor, Elladan, Elrohir, Elrond, Eomer, Eowyn, Faramir, Frodo, Galadriel, Gandalf / Olorin, Gimli, Glorfindel, Gríma, Haldir, Legolas, Merry, Mouth of Sauron, Nazgûl, Original Character, Orophin, Pippin, Rúmil, Sam, Saruman, Sauron, Théoden, Théodred, Treebeard, Witch King
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Drama, Erotica, Fantasy, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort, Parody, Romance, Suspense, Tragedy
Warnings: AU (alternate universe), Character Death, First Draft, Graphic Sex, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 16979 Read Count: 2537
[Report This] Published: 20/08/12 Updated: 30/04/13
Reviewer: EnchantessM Signed
Date: 03/09/12 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Ooooh please, please, PLEASE make it a love story between Glorfindel and Raleigh? There are so few good HET/love stories for Glorfindel. Plus, you need not worry about the mortal/immortal thing. If it's meant to be, I'm certain the Valar will oblige Glorfindel and give Raleigh some Limpe, which *will* grant her immortality and a chance to sail west with the golden elf-lord.
*If you want to know more about Limpe, check out the "Unfinnished Tales" - the chapter of "The chaining of Melkor".

Author's Response: I agree wholeheartedly with the whole Glorfindel thing. It would be a waste of a good elf. ;) Thank you for reviewing my stories. It's much appreciated. I'll be sure to check Limpe out thank you.

Reviewer: EnchantessM Signed
Date: 07/09/12 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Hi there!
May I proposes a few corrections? And please don't take it but with my kind intention and desire for this stroy to be as awesome and flawless readability wise that it can be:
"You've had a trivial day. I am aware of your flustered state of mind. With my permission, I ask you to stay."

I would paraphrase to "You've had a trying day. I am aware of your flustered state of mind. You have my permission to stay, if you wish."

Also, it should read "with all due respect". :)

Again, I mean no offense, it's just the editor in me.

Other than that, it's lovely, and thanks for posting. I'm looking forward to your next installment.

Author's Response: Thank you very much. I welcome any help I can get. Just went back to fix it. Your kindness is welcome any time. Sometimes I get side-tracked and all that when I'm writing and forget to proof read, so again, thank you.

Reviewer: EnchantessM Signed
Date: 15/02/13 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

~taps on Tori's shoulder~
ahem, it's been ages in fangirl's standards anyway since you last updated. Let up on Prof. Bormoir and whatever lucky guy you have there and get busy, missy! :P

Serioudly though, come on, start getting those chapter flowing again. The suspense is killing me! And this also means I want updates for DTRA and The OUUME or however you spell that story. :))

Author's Response: Sorry EnchantessM. I'm trying my very best to get some updates rolling again. And I'll get DTRA and TOUFA updated ASAP. ;)

The Official Unofficial Fanfiction Academy by ToriLee Rated: R [Reviews - 15]
Summary: What happens when the Canons of Fanfiction decide to teach fanfiction authors?
Categories: Crossovers, Other Movies, Off Topic
Characters: Aragorn, Arwen, Boromir, Celeborn, Denethor, Elrond, Eomer, Eowyn, Faramir, Frodo, Galadriel, Gandalf / Olorin, Gimli, Glorfindel, Gollum, Gríma, Haldir, Legolas, Merry, Mouth of Sauron, Nazgûl, Orcs/Uruk-Hai, Original Character, Other Canon Character, Pippin, Sam, Saruman, Sauron, Théoden, Tom Bombadil, Treebeard
Genres: Action/Adventure, Fantasy, Friendship, Humor, Other, Parody, Romance
Warnings: AU (alternate universe), First Draft
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 19269 Read Count: 3119
[Report This] Published: 22/08/12 Updated: 08/03/13
Reviewer: EnchantessM Signed
Date: 03/10/12 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: The Story of Linus

Um Tory? Will you get your behind out of bed already? And tell Prof. Boromir no more shagging until the dance? Sheesh you two are at it like rabbits, and you're neglecting your readers! :P

When's your next installment, liri-maer? And while we're on the topic of a next installment, when's the next installment for TTW? Just as it's about to get good with Glorfindel, you're leaving us elf-lovers hanging? Wicked, wicked woman!

Author's Response: I AM SO SORRY! I'm trying my hardest to type my updates. I promise I'll get it out as soon as I can. Rabbits? Oh baby ;)

Reviewer: EnchantessM Signed
Date: 11/09/12 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Broken Pipes And Panty Raids

Good grief, you need to put a warning note before your epilogue. I literally spew out my green earl grey due to that! Good thing I was using my desktop this time. lol

Ack, oh well, my keybored did need some clean up, I suppose. :p

Reviewer: EnchantessM Signed
Date: 11/09/12 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Broken Pipes And Panty Raids

Ai, Morgoth balls, of course, I meant to type "prologue". grrrr...

Reviewer: EnchantessM Signed
Date: 12/03/13 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Dumbledore's Carnival

hmmmm, an explosion eh?
Let me guess, Mithrandir wanted to crash the party? :P

I'm looking forward to your next installment. Please do not take your time.

Reviewer: EnchantessM Signed
Date: 17/09/12 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Anonymous Letters and Healing Soup

Aww Tori, you poor dear! If I could be closer I'd make you my amazing chicken soup to make you right as rain in no time. Since I'm not, can you give someone a honey-do list of things to buy to help you get better REAL SOON:

1- Tea, tea and more tea: Traditional Medicinals Cold Care PM before nap and night time, Gypsy Cold Care and Triple Echinacea tea during day time (not together of course). I recommend sweetening the tea with locally harvested raw honey. Raw honey is known to have antibiotic properties.

2- Get nice and snug with a humidifier on in the room, and put some Eucalyptus and lavender essential oil there (8 of the first, 4 of the latter. YMMV).

3- Apply to your chest close to the throat MammaMichal's Hot Lava Muscle Rub to help with your congestion so that you can breath better. It's all natural with lots of menthol crystals and includes Eucalyptus essential oils along with other warming essential oils in its proprietary combination. I assure you the rub doesn't stink (unlike many others in the market. In fact it smells almost good enough to eat - BUT DON'T! J)

4- Black Elderberry Syrup. YMMV - follow the Manufacturer's directions per the dosage.

Get well soon, hun! We don't Professor Boromir to start feeling lonely, 'cause his favorite author is on the invalid side! :P

Author's Response: Oh my goodness I feel so loved right now. Well, I first thought it was a cold, but now it's full out flu. It doesn't mean I won't sit here to update, what the hell else am I gonna do while I'm sick? XD I've definitely stocked up on tea and honey, it seems to be the only medicine that ACTUALLY works for me lol. Your Boromir comment made me laugh, oh what shall he do without me? Thank you for your medicinal advice, it's much needed.

Reviewer: EnchantessM Signed
Date: 14/09/12 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Rory's Warm Welcome

Oh no's!
On all stories???
You're killing me here!

Author's Response: I'm sorry! But it's only for Thicker Than Water thank Eru! The last thing I need is to explain to the cops about a dead beta-reader! Well, there was the other time but...we won't go there. XD

Reviewer: EnchantessM Signed
Date: 14/09/12 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Rory's Warm Welcome

Well, Aragorn should thank his lucky stars he did not stumble into a pillow fight. :P

Anyway, prrrrrrecious, when will you update "Thicker Than Water"? :)

Author's Response: It'll kill you to hear this. But I've caught that disease that affects the brain. Writers block.

Reviewer: EnchantessM Signed
Date: 22/08/12 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Rory's Warm Welcome

A good start. I dig the sense of humor and see how things progress. :)
A little correction though - I think you meant to write weift punishment will be dealt, not "shift" - per harasing the staff on the Monday schedule.

As a side note, I hope you'll update "Down the river Anudin" soon. ;)

Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'll be sure to fix that. And as for Down The River Anduin, I've got tons of ideas in store so don't you worry. :-)

Reviewer: EnchantessM Signed
Date: 22/08/12 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Rory's Warm Welcome

Ack, apologies, that's what I get for multi-tasking - I meant to type "I look forward to seeing how things progress". As for the correction "swift" NOT "weift", Eru have mercy on my fae, for my mind seems to be wondering again... ~sigh~

Author's Response: No apologies needed. I'm just glad for the review

Reviewer: EnchantessM Signed
Date: 28/08/12 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: It's A Rory Vs. Luster World

UGH, how I loathe cliffhangers!
Please update soon! :)

Reviewer: EnchantessM Signed
Date: 30/08/12 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: The Bet Of Suitors and Wizards

Hmmph, Legolas and Haldir playing along, really? After Rory saved them from the lusters they'll go ahead and toy with her feelings? So un-eldar like. I hope there's going to be some real love blooming to make up for that. :)

I'm looking forward to your next installment!

Author's Response: Well I didn't wanna leave them out of anything. It was unjust XD I promise upfront they won't be bad. But thank you.

My Lord Of The Rings Monologue by ToriLee Rated: PG [Reviews - 6]
Summary: In my drama class we had to create a monologue on one aspect of our life. So I chose to link Lord of the Rings with the relationship I have with my dad.
Categories: Off Topic
Characters: None
Genres: Other
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 225 Read Count: 450
[Report This] Published: 05/09/12 Updated: 05/09/12
Reviewer: EnchantessM Signed
Date: 05/09/12 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

~sigh~
In so many ways, this also describes the relationship of my dad and I. :(

Author's Response: I think it definitely embodies the relationship between a daughter and father. Growing up is hard, and sometimes, dad's can't take it. Thanks for the review.

Reflection by SouffleGirl Rated: PG-13 [Reviews - 4]
Summary: Hilary is from the 21st century. Allasëa is an elf of Rivendell. Their worlds collied on the eve of Hilary's death. She is now stuck in a world she only knows from books. Not only does she have to adapt to her new surroundings, but she's also on a quest for her memories. Hilary is suffering from amnesia. Oh, and there's also the fact that the two girls are stuck in one body.
Categories: Movie-verse
Characters: Glorfindel, Legolas
Genres: Action/Adventure, Fantasy, Friendship, Mystery, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 7829 Read Count: 348
[Report This] Published: 17/02/13 Updated: 24/02/13
Reviewer: EnchantessM Signed
Date: 21/02/13 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

May I offer a couple of corrections?
As you can imagine, the elves have different gender names than humans.
Female elf: elleth
Males elf: ellon.
It just throws me off whenever you refer to the ellons and elleths as men and women. I don't know, maybe it's just me. :)

Other than that, they story is quite good, and I'm curious to read where you'll take us.

Author's Response: Oh shoot, how could I forget that .. I know that they have different gender names, but as I was writing I totally forgot .. I'll fix it and from now on I'll use the correct term ;) Thanks for pointing it out

Celebrían’s Farewell. by Elbereth Rated: G [Reviews - 1]
Summary: Elrond has healed Celebrían physically, but in mind and spirit she feels she can never fully recover. Her torment at the hands of the Orcs is still fresh in her mind, and she decides to leave for the Undying Land alone.
Categories: Book-verse
Characters: Arwen, Celebrían, Elladan, Elrohir, Elrond
Genres: Poetry
Warnings: First Draft
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 350 Read Count: 152
[Report This] Published: 29/03/13 Updated: 29/03/13
Reviewer: EnchantessM Signed
Date: 30/03/13 Title: Chapter 1: Celebrían’s Farewell

It's lovely, but may I propose one correction?
Saying "children" just seems wrong to me (that's what members of the race of men have), perhaps you can consider "elflings"? :)

Author's Response: That's a very valid point- thanks! I shall edit now. :)