Reviews by EnchantessM
Summary: When Cory Blair is called into work in the middle of the night, she finds herself staring at the body of a man who looks like he bounced out of a Medieval Fair. And this time, he's alive.
Categories: Crossovers Characters: Boromir, Original Character
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Drama, Erotica, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Warnings: AU (alternate universe), First Draft, Graphic Sex, Rape, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 62601 Read Count: 20257
Published: Aug 16 2012 Updated: Sep 21 2015 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: An Unwanted Call Reviewer: EnchantessM Signed
Definately different - but I like it. Curious to see how the two will get along at Blair's place. It would certainly be a culture shock for Boromir. J

As a side note, I'm more into a modern-day-girl/elf action, but this story has picked my interest. Please update soon. :)

Author's Response: Thank you very much! It just kinda came to me and I was like "Eh...why not?" And I'm trying to piece together how it'll go all together. But thank you again for your kind review.
Date: Aug 17 2012
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Montpelier Reviewer: EnchantessM Signed
A delicious lime and background all in one - thanks for that!
Looking forward to your next installment. :)

Author's Response: I try... XD But thanks for the review
Date: Aug 31 2012
Summary: What happens when the Canons of Fanfiction decide to teach fanfiction authors?
Categories: Crossovers, Other Movies, Off Topic Characters: Aragorn, Arwen, Boromir, Celeborn, Denethor, Elrond, Eomer, Eowyn, Faramir, Frodo, Galadriel, Gandalf / Olorin, Gimli, Glorfindel, Gollum, Gríma, Haldir, Legolas, Merry, Mouth of Sauron, Nazgûl, Orcs/Uruk-Hai, Original Character, Other Canon Character, Pippin, Sam, Saruman, Sauron, Théoden, Tom Bombadil, Treebeard
Genres: Action/Adventure, Fantasy, Friendship, Humor, Other, Parody, Romance
Warnings: AU (alternate universe), First Draft
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 43598 Read Count: 15510
Published: Aug 21 2012 Updated: Mar 27 2016 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: The Story of Linus Reviewer: EnchantessM Signed
Um Tory? Will you get your behind out of bed already? And tell Prof. Boromir no more shagging until the dance? Sheesh you two are at it like rabbits, and you're neglecting your readers! :P

When's your next installment, liri-maer? And while we're on the topic of a next installment, when's the next installment for TTW? Just as it's about to get good with Glorfindel, you're leaving us elf-lovers hanging? Wicked, wicked woman!

Author's Response: I AM SO SORRY! I'm trying my hardest to type my updates. I promise I'll get it out as soon as I can. Rabbits? Oh baby ;)
Date: Oct 02 2012
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Broken Pipes And Panty Raids Reviewer: EnchantessM Signed
Good grief, you need to put a warning note before your epilogue. I literally spew out my green earl grey due to that! Good thing I was using my desktop this time. lol

Ack, oh well, my keybored did need some clean up, I suppose. :p
Date: Sep 10 2012
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Broken Pipes And Panty Raids Reviewer: EnchantessM Signed
Ai, Morgoth balls, of course, I meant to type "prologue". grrrr...
Date: Sep 11 2012
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Dumbledore's Carnival Reviewer: EnchantessM Signed
hmmmm, an explosion eh?
Let me guess, Mithrandir wanted to crash the party? :P

I'm looking forward to your next installment. Please do not take your time.

Author's Response: Of course! He'd never miss a chance to light off one of his whizzpoppers.
Date: Mar 11 2013
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Anonymous Letters and Healing Soup Reviewer: EnchantessM Signed
Aww Tori, you poor dear! If I could be closer I'd make you my amazing chicken soup to make you right as rain in no time. Since I'm not, can you give someone a honey-do list of things to buy to help you get better REAL SOON:

1- Tea, tea and more tea: Traditional Medicinals Cold Care PM before nap and night time, Gypsy Cold Care and Triple Echinacea tea during day time (not together of course). I recommend sweetening the tea with locally harvested raw honey. Raw honey is known to have antibiotic properties.

2- Get nice and snug with a humidifier on in the room, and put some Eucalyptus and lavender essential oil there (8 of the first, 4 of the latter. YMMV).

3- Apply to your chest close to the throat MammaMichal's Hot Lava Muscle Rub to help with your congestion so that you can breath better. It's all natural with lots of menthol crystals and includes Eucalyptus essential oils along with other warming essential oils in its proprietary combination. I assure you the rub doesn't stink (unlike many others in the market. In fact it smells almost good enough to eat - BUT DON'T! J)

4- Black Elderberry Syrup. YMMV - follow the Manufacturer's directions per the dosage.

Get well soon, hun! We don't Professor Boromir to start feeling lonely, 'cause his favorite author is on the invalid side! :P

Author's Response: Oh my goodness I feel so loved right now. Well, I first thought it was a cold, but now it's full out flu. It doesn't mean I won't sit here to update, what the hell else am I gonna do while I'm sick? XD I've definitely stocked up on tea and honey, it seems to be the only medicine that ACTUALLY works for me lol. Your Boromir comment made me laugh, oh what shall he do without me? Thank you for your medicinal advice, it's much needed.
Date: Sep 17 2012
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Rory's Warm Welcome Reviewer: EnchantessM Signed
Oh no's!
On all stories???
You're killing me here!

Author's Response: I'm sorry! But it's only for Thicker Than Water thank Eru! The last thing I need is to explain to the cops about a dead beta-reader! Well, there was the other time but...we won't go there. XD
Date: Sep 13 2012
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Rory's Warm Welcome Reviewer: EnchantessM Signed
Well, Aragorn should thank his lucky stars he did not stumble into a pillow fight. :P

Anyway, prrrrrrecious, when will you update "Thicker Than Water"? :)

Author's Response: It'll kill you to hear this. But I've caught that disease that affects the brain. Writers block.
Date: Sep 13 2012
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Rory's Warm Welcome Reviewer: EnchantessM Signed
A good start. I dig the sense of humor and see how things progress. :)
A little correction though - I think you meant to write weift punishment will be dealt, not "shift" - per harasing the staff on the Monday schedule.

As a side note, I hope you'll update "Down the river Anudin" soon. ;)

Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'll be sure to fix that. And as for Down The River Anduin, I've got tons of ideas in store so don't you worry. :-)
Date: Aug 22 2012
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Rory's Warm Welcome Reviewer: EnchantessM Signed
Ack, apologies, that's what I get for multi-tasking - I meant to type "I look forward to seeing how things progress". As for the correction "swift" NOT "weift", Eru have mercy on my fae, for my mind seems to be wondering again... ~sigh~

Author's Response: No apologies needed. I'm just glad for the review
Date: Aug 22 2012
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: It's A Rory Vs. Luster World Reviewer: EnchantessM Signed
UGH, how I loathe cliffhangers!
Please update soon! :)
Date: Aug 28 2012
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: The Bet Of Suitors and Wizards Reviewer: EnchantessM Signed
Hmmph, Legolas and Haldir playing along, really? After Rory saved them from the lusters they'll go ahead and toy with her feelings? So un-eldar like. I hope there's going to be some real love blooming to make up for that. :)

I'm looking forward to your next installment!

Author's Response: Well I didn't wanna leave them out of anything. It was unjust XD I promise upfront they won't be bad. But thank you.
Date: Aug 29 2012
Summary: In my drama class we had to create a monologue on one aspect of our life. So I chose to link Lord of the Rings with the relationship I have with my dad.
Categories: Off Topic Characters: None
Genres: Other
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 225 Read Count: 1449
Published: Sep 04 2012 Updated: Sep 04 2012 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: EnchantessM Signed
In so many ways, this also describes the relationship of my dad and I. :(

Author's Response: I think it definitely embodies the relationship between a daughter and father. Growing up is hard, and sometimes, dad's can't take it. Thanks for the review.
Date: Sep 05 2012
Reflection by SouffleGirl Rated: PG-13 [Reviews - 4]
Summary: Hilary is from the 21st century. Allasëa is an elf of Rivendell. Their worlds collied on the eve of Hilary's death. She is now stuck in a world she only knows from books. Not only does she have to adapt to her new surroundings, but she's also on a quest for her memories. Hilary is suffering from amnesia. Oh, and there's also the fact that the two girls are stuck in one body.
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Glorfindel, Legolas
Genres: Action/Adventure, Fantasy, Friendship, Mystery, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 7829 Read Count: 1411
Published: Feb 17 2013 Updated: Feb 24 2013 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2 Reviewer: EnchantessM Signed
May I offer a couple of corrections?
As you can imagine, the elves have different gender names than humans.
Female elf: elleth
Males elf: ellon.
It just throws me off whenever you refer to the ellons and elleths as men and women. I don't know, maybe it's just me. :)

Other than that, they story is quite good, and I'm curious to read where you'll take us.

Author's Response: Oh shoot, how could I forget that .. I know that they have different gender names, but as I was writing I totally forgot .. I'll fix it and from now on I'll use the correct term ;) Thanks for pointing it out
Date: Feb 21 2013
Summary: Elrond has healed Celebrían physically, but in mind and spirit she feels she can never fully recover. Her torment at the hands of the Orcs is still fresh in her mind, and she decides to leave for the Undying Land alone.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Arwen, Celebrían, Elladan, Elrohir, Elrond
Genres: Poetry
Warnings: First Draft
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 350 Read Count: 912
Published: Mar 29 2013 Updated: Mar 29 2013 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Celebrían’s Farewell Reviewer: EnchantessM Signed
It's lovely, but may I propose one correction?
Saying "children" just seems wrong to me (that's what members of the race of men have), perhaps you can consider "elflings"? :)

Author's Response: That's a very valid point- thanks! I shall edit now. :)
Date: Mar 29 2013
Evermind by ToriLee Rated: NC-17 [Reviews - 6]
Summary: Nearly 116 years after the death of Elessar, Middle Earth continues to flourish. Looking into the lives of the King of Rohan and his family, and the struggle they go through to save their country from deception.
Categories: Book-verse, Off Topic Characters: Eomer, Original Character, Théoden, Théodred
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, Fantasy, Hurt/Comfort
Warnings: Character Death, Graphic Sex, Rape, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 26231 Read Count: 8805
Published: May 26 2013 Updated: Nov 02 2015 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Reviewer: EnchantessM Signed
As the beta, I can attest it *is* a lovely chapter. Unfortunately, it did not take. Please repost. :)

Author's Response: Ugh, computer's right? I fixed it, thank you very much for helping me out. :)
Date: Mar 07 2014
Summary: Twelve hundred years after the Second War for the Ring the elves still walk among men. The Valars' promises and prophesies of the Undying Lands have been proven false as Earth and Middle Earth merged into one realm.

What happened to the elves? Do they still walk among us today? Is it possible that there are other "inaccuracies" in the Tolkien Universe?
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Haldir, Legolas
Genres: Angst, Drama, Erotica, General, Humor, Romance
Warnings: First Draft, Graphic Sex
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 28691 Read Count: 9097
Published: Sep 16 2013 Updated: Jan 18 2014 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Reviewer: EnchantessM Signed
Hmmm, per title, how about "Where The Leafs Fall"?

Author's Response: I like it.
Date: Oct 15 2013
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Reviewer: EnchantessM Signed
I wonder what will happen next? :))
Will Maria get a taste of her own experience so to speak, by having Legolas (Lucas) walk in on them? :P

Author's Response: Perhaps ....
Date: Oct 15 2013
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: EnchantessM Signed
Ooooooh, I like the way it started, and I thank thee for going to add a well needed NC17 here. I absolutely love ellon/adaneth action, especially modern day gals! :)

If you're looking for a beta, I'll be happy to oblige. Just send me an e-mail (
Date: Sep 17 2013
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Reviewer: EnchantessM Signed
You're def. keeping the momentum - another lovely chapter! :)

A few comments if I may, for you to consider incorporating for a better flowing chapter:

1- The term for lembas is waybread not wey bread.

2- The kitchen was stocked with stainless steel appliances not outfitted.

3- One is setting the plates on the table, not fixing them - I presume they were not broken? ;)

4- Last but not least - Maria eyed the food on her plate, not eyes.

Also a proposed stylistic change: Haldir is the epitamy of proper speech and diction. I simply cannot imagine him say "won't". I would use "will not". Of course - your story and your Haldir, but please reconsider? J

Once again thanks for another lovely chapter.
(my offer to beta still stands, if you wish)
Date: Sep 18 2013