Penname: EnchantessM [Contact] Real name:
Member Since: 08/11/11
Membership status: Member
I work as a freelance editor in RL. I also localize medieaval browser based games (not going to name drop though! J). I'm a huge LOTR fan and especially like fan fic involving Legolas, Haldir and Glorfindel (not together though! I don't like slash. On the other hand, I enjoy well-written Mary Sue and OC romance type stories). If you're looking for a beta, I'll be happy to oblige - send me an e-mail. :)

Oh and shameless promotion, check out the latest videos I uploaded to YT:

"You With Me" - a tribute to Lord Elrond and lady Celebrian:

Elvish Love (Rose of Sharon Instrumental):

Beta-reader: Yes
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Summary: When Cory Blair is called into work in the middle of the night, she finds herself staring at the body of a man who looks like he bounced out of a Medieval Fair. And this time, he's alive.
Categories: Crossovers
Characters: Boromir, Original Character
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Drama, Erotica, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Warnings: AU (alternate universe), First Draft, Graphic Sex, Rape, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 62601 Read Count: 12939
[Report This] Published: 16/08/12 Updated: 22/09/15
Reviewer: EnchantessM Signed
Date: 15/09/12 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18: A Different Sort Of Punishment

Nothing wrong with kink every now-and again. :P

Reviewer: EnchantessM Signed
Date: 17/08/12 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: An Unwanted Call

Definately different - but I like it. Curious to see how the two will get along at Blair's place. It would certainly be a culture shock for Boromir. J

As a side note, I'm more into a modern-day-girl/elf action, but this story has picked my interest. Please update soon. :)

Author's Response: Thank you very much! It just kinda came to me and I was like "Eh...why not?" And I'm trying to piece together how it'll go all together. But thank you again for your kind review.

Reviewer: EnchantessM Signed
Date: 31/08/12 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Montpelier

A delicious lime and background all in one - thanks for that!
Looking forward to your next installment. :)

Author's Response: I try... XD But thanks for the review

Summary: What happens when the Canons of Fanfiction decide to teach fanfiction authors?
Categories: Crossovers, Other Movies, Off Topic
Characters: Aragorn, Arwen, Boromir, Celeborn, Denethor, Elrond, Eomer, Eowyn, Faramir, Frodo, Galadriel, Gandalf / Olorin, Gimli, Glorfindel, Gollum, Gríma, Haldir, Legolas, Merry, Mouth of Sauron, Nazgûl, Orcs/Uruk-Hai, Original Character, Other Canon Character, Pippin, Sam, Saruman, Sauron, Théoden, Tom Bombadil, Treebeard
Genres: Action/Adventure, Fantasy, Friendship, Humor, Other, Parody, Romance
Warnings: AU (alternate universe), First Draft
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 30839 Read Count: 8458
[Report This] Published: 22/08/12 Updated: 04/10/15
Reviewer: EnchantessM Signed
Date: 02/10/12 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: The Story of Linus

Um Tory? Will you get your behind out of bed already? And tell Prof. Boromir no more shagging until the dance? Sheesh you two are at it like rabbits, and you're neglecting your readers! :P

When's your next installment, liri-maer? And while we're on the topic of a next installment, when's the next installment for TTW? Just as it's about to get good with Glorfindel, you're leaving us elf-lovers hanging? Wicked, wicked woman!

Author's Response: I AM SO SORRY! I'm trying my hardest to type my updates. I promise I'll get it out as soon as I can. Rabbits? Oh baby ;)

Reviewer: EnchantessM Signed
Date: 10/09/12 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Broken Pipes And Panty Raids

Good grief, you need to put a warning note before your epilogue. I literally spew out my green earl grey due to that! Good thing I was using my desktop this time. lol

Ack, oh well, my keybored did need some clean up, I suppose. :p

Reviewer: EnchantessM Signed
Date: 11/09/12 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Broken Pipes And Panty Raids

Ai, Morgoth balls, of course, I meant to type "prologue". grrrr...

Reviewer: EnchantessM Signed
Date: 12/03/13 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Dumbledore's Carnival

hmmmm, an explosion eh?
Let me guess, Mithrandir wanted to crash the party? :P

I'm looking forward to your next installment. Please do not take your time.

Author's Response: Of course! He'd never miss a chance to light off one of his whizzpoppers.

Reviewer: EnchantessM Signed
Date: 17/09/12 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Anonymous Letters and Healing Soup

Aww Tori, you poor dear! If I could be closer I'd make you my amazing chicken soup to make you right as rain in no time. Since I'm not, can you give someone a honey-do list of things to buy to help you get better REAL SOON:

1- Tea, tea and more tea: Traditional Medicinals Cold Care PM before nap and night time, Gypsy Cold Care and Triple Echinacea tea during day time (not together of course). I recommend sweetening the tea with locally harvested raw honey. Raw honey is known to have antibiotic properties.

2- Get nice and snug with a humidifier on in the room, and put some Eucalyptus and lavender essential oil there (8 of the first, 4 of the latter. YMMV).

3- Apply to your chest close to the throat MammaMichal's Hot Lava Muscle Rub to help with your congestion so that you can breath better. It's all natural with lots of menthol crystals and includes Eucalyptus essential oils along with other warming essential oils in its proprietary combination. I assure you the rub doesn't stink (unlike many others in the market. In fact it smells almost good enough to eat - BUT DON'T! J)

4- Black Elderberry Syrup. YMMV - follow the Manufacturer's directions per the dosage.

Get well soon, hun! We don't Professor Boromir to start feeling lonely, 'cause his favorite author is on the invalid side! :P

Author's Response: Oh my goodness I feel so loved right now. Well, I first thought it was a cold, but now it's full out flu. It doesn't mean I won't sit here to update, what the hell else am I gonna do while I'm sick? XD I've definitely stocked up on tea and honey, it seems to be the only medicine that ACTUALLY works for me lol. Your Boromir comment made me laugh, oh what shall he do without me? Thank you for your medicinal advice, it's much needed.

Reviewer: EnchantessM Signed
Date: 14/09/12 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Rory's Warm Welcome

Oh no's!
On all stories???
You're killing me here!

Author's Response: I'm sorry! But it's only for Thicker Than Water thank Eru! The last thing I need is to explain to the cops about a dead beta-reader! Well, there was the other time but...we won't go there. XD

Reviewer: EnchantessM Signed
Date: 14/09/12 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Rory's Warm Welcome

Well, Aragorn should thank his lucky stars he did not stumble into a pillow fight. :P

Anyway, prrrrrrecious, when will you update "Thicker Than Water"? :)

Author's Response: It'll kill you to hear this. But I've caught that disease that affects the brain. Writers block.

Reviewer: EnchantessM Signed
Date: 22/08/12 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Rory's Warm Welcome

A good start. I dig the sense of humor and see how things progress. :)
A little correction though - I think you meant to write weift punishment will be dealt, not "shift" - per harasing the staff on the Monday schedule.

As a side note, I hope you'll update "Down the river Anudin" soon. ;)

Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'll be sure to fix that. And as for Down The River Anduin, I've got tons of ideas in store so don't you worry. :-)

Reviewer: EnchantessM Signed
Date: 22/08/12 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Rory's Warm Welcome

Ack, apologies, that's what I get for multi-tasking - I meant to type "I look forward to seeing how things progress". As for the correction "swift" NOT "weift", Eru have mercy on my fae, for my mind seems to be wondering again... ~sigh~

Author's Response: No apologies needed. I'm just glad for the review

Reviewer: EnchantessM Signed
Date: 28/08/12 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: It's A Rory Vs. Luster World

UGH, how I loathe cliffhangers!
Please update soon! :)

Reviewer: EnchantessM Signed
Date: 30/08/12 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: The Bet Of Suitors and Wizards

Hmmph, Legolas and Haldir playing along, really? After Rory saved them from the lusters they'll go ahead and toy with her feelings? So un-eldar like. I hope there's going to be some real love blooming to make up for that. :)

I'm looking forward to your next installment!

Author's Response: Well I didn't wanna leave them out of anything. It was unjust XD I promise upfront they won't be bad. But thank you.

Summary: In my drama class we had to create a monologue on one aspect of our life. So I chose to link Lord of the Rings with the relationship I have with my dad.
Categories: Off Topic
Characters: None
Genres: Other
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 225 Read Count: 914
[Report This] Published: 05/09/12 Updated: 05/09/12
Reviewer: EnchantessM Signed
Date: 05/09/12 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

In so many ways, this also describes the relationship of my dad and I. :(

Author's Response: I think it definitely embodies the relationship between a daughter and father. Growing up is hard, and sometimes, dad's can't take it. Thanks for the review.

Reflection by SouffleGirl Rated: PG-13 [Reviews - 4]
Summary: Hilary is from the 21st century. Allasëa is an elf of Rivendell. Their worlds collied on the eve of Hilary's death. She is now stuck in a world she only knows from books. Not only does she have to adapt to her new surroundings, but she's also on a quest for her memories. Hilary is suffering from amnesia. Oh, and there's also the fact that the two girls are stuck in one body.
Categories: Movie-verse
Characters: Glorfindel, Legolas
Genres: Action/Adventure, Fantasy, Friendship, Mystery, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 7829 Read Count: 697
[Report This] Published: 17/02/13 Updated: 24/02/13
Reviewer: EnchantessM Signed
Date: 21/02/13 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

May I offer a couple of corrections?
As you can imagine, the elves have different gender names than humans.
Female elf: elleth
Males elf: ellon.
It just throws me off whenever you refer to the ellons and elleths as men and women. I don't know, maybe it's just me. :)

Other than that, they story is quite good, and I'm curious to read where you'll take us.

Author's Response: Oh shoot, how could I forget that .. I know that they have different gender names, but as I was writing I totally forgot .. I'll fix it and from now on I'll use the correct term ;) Thanks for pointing it out

Summary: Elrond has healed Celebrían physically, but in mind and spirit she feels she can never fully recover. Her torment at the hands of the Orcs is still fresh in her mind, and she decides to leave for the Undying Land alone.
Categories: Book-verse
Characters: Arwen, Celebrían, Elladan, Elrohir, Elrond
Genres: Poetry
Warnings: First Draft
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 350 Read Count: 453
[Report This] Published: 29/03/13 Updated: 29/03/13
Reviewer: EnchantessM Signed
Date: 30/03/13 Title: Chapter 1: Celebrían’s Farewell

It's lovely, but may I propose one correction?
Saying "children" just seems wrong to me (that's what members of the race of men have), perhaps you can consider "elflings"? :)

Author's Response: That's a very valid point- thanks! I shall edit now. :)

Evermind by ToriLee Rated: NC-17 [Reviews - 6]
Summary: Nearly 116 years after the death of Elessar, Middle Earth continues to flourish. Looking into the lives of the King of Rohan and his family, and the struggle they go through to save their country from deception.
Categories: Book-verse, Off Topic
Characters: Eomer, Original Character, Théoden, Théodred
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, Fantasy, Hurt/Comfort
Warnings: Character Death, Graphic Sex, Rape, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 26231 Read Count: 4426
[Report This] Published: 26/05/13 Updated: 02/11/15
Reviewer: EnchantessM Signed
Date: 07/03/14 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

As the beta, I can attest it *is* a lovely chapter. Unfortunately, it did not take. Please repost. :)

Author's Response: Ugh, computer's right? I fixed it, thank you very much for helping me out. :)

Summary: Twelve hundred years after the Second War for the Ring the elves still walk among men. The Valars' promises and prophesies of the Undying Lands have been proven false as Earth and Middle Earth merged into one realm.

What happened to the elves? Do they still walk among us today? Is it possible that there are other "inaccuracies" in the Tolkien Universe?
Categories: Movie-verse
Characters: Haldir, Legolas
Genres: Angst, Drama, Erotica, General, Humor, Romance
Warnings: First Draft, Graphic Sex
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 28691 Read Count: 5121
[Report This] Published: 17/09/13 Updated: 18/01/14
Reviewer: EnchantessM Signed
Date: 15/10/13 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Hmmm, per title, how about "Where The Leafs Fall"?

Author's Response: I like it.

Reviewer: EnchantessM Signed
Date: 16/10/13 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I wonder what will happen next? :))
Will Maria get a taste of her own experience so to speak, by having Legolas (Lucas) walk in on them? :P

Author's Response: Perhaps ....