Penname: EldarinPrincess [Contact] Real name:
Member Since: 23/11/10
Membership status: Member
Bio:
Trying to find the "Straight Path". Introduced to Tolkien via the Two Towers movie. Since then I've read the LotR trilogy, The Hobbit, The Silmarillion, and a little bit of Unfinished Tales 1. Always appreciate reviews so my writing can grow from them.
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Reviews by EldarinPrincess
Summary:

We all know what happens to Gandalf during the books, but what were his secret thoughts...?


Categories: Book-verse, Movie-verse
Characters: Aragorn, Arwen, Bilbo, Frodo, Galadriel, Gandalf / Olorin, Gimli, Gollum, Legolas, Manwe, Merry, Pippin, Sam, Sméagol, The Fellowship, Théoden
Genres: Action/Adventure, Fantasy, Humor
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 5569 Read Count: 5743
[Report This] Published: 06/07/08 Updated: 14/06/13
Reviewer: EldarinPrincess Signed
Date: 25/11/10 Title: Chapter 1: Laughter Floating Over My Shoulder

I love this!

Reviewer: EldarinPrincess Signed
Date: 25/11/10 Title: Chapter 2: Giving It Up

"rest in peace on my little island"--perfect

Summary: This is a poem that I wrote to get some grief out of my system after a very long hard school year.
Categories: Off Topic
Characters: None
Genres: Poetry
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 178 Read Count: 947
[Report This] Published: 16/05/09 Updated: 16/05/09
Reviewer: EldarinPrincess Signed
Date: 09/07/11 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I sense the deeper emotions at play here. I hope you were able to come to some sort of peace. This was well done. Thanks for sharing.

Summary: A series of lists, of things that only the really insane lord of the rings fan would do.
Categories: Off Topic
Characters: None
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1323 Read Count: 7389
[Report This] Published: 26/05/09 Updated: 06/07/09
Reviewer: EldarinPrincess Signed
Date: 09/06/11 Title: Chapter 1: The Basics

This was brilliant; thanks for posting :)

Dangerous Business by Anwyn Rated: PG-13 [Reviews - 15]
Summary: It is a Dangerous Business, writing Fanfiction, If you don't keep your feet there is no telling where you might be swept off to.
Categories: Off Topic
Characters: Elphir, Original Character
Genres: Humor
Warnings: AU (alternate universe)
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 38783 Read Count: 13318
[Report This] Published: 03/12/09 Updated: 05/03/11
Reviewer: EldarinPrincess Signed
Date: 12/01/11 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: This was definately NOT in my horoscope for today

giant hamsters in clown suits

Reviewer: EldarinPrincess Signed
Date: 12/01/11 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Small Possessions

the great mysterious tampon...love it

Author's Response: To this day such a thing still remains an uncomfortable mystery to most men!

Reviewer: EldarinPrincess Signed
Date: 12/01/11 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: From bad, to strange to...simply alright.

loved the bit about her wearing the dress; it's so true that in most of the mary sue stories of middle-earth whatever clothing the girls are given they are able to fit into without problems, and it seems always so natural to them.

Author's Response: Yes, exactly I have noticed that when a character, usually female, shows up and needs a new set of clothes there is always a gown or dress that just happens to be laying around and not only fits her perfectly but she looks absolutely beautiful and turns the head of the nearest male of course! While I don't imagine in Middle Earth typical fashion would have been tight and fitted but more loose and flowing that still does not mean everything there is 'One size fits all'

Summary: Lothiriel fondly recalls the first time she saw Eomer's...
Categories: Book-verse
Characters: Eomer, Lothiriel
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1322 Read Count: 1388
[Report This] Published: 22/06/10 Updated: 22/06/10
Reviewer: EldarinPrincess Signed
Date: 06/05/11 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Lovely :)

Summary: From time to time we feel the need to say what's on our mind. This is my bit of advice.
Categories: Off Topic
Characters: None
Genres: Essay
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1075 Read Count: 1515
[Report This] Published: 30/06/10 Updated: 30/06/10
Reviewer: EldarinPrincess Signed
Date: 26/11/10 Title: Chapter 1: A Bit Of Advice

Thank you for posting this, on behalf of writers and reviewers, especially since you are both yourself! It is important for the reviewer to leave an objective commentary about what they just read, otherwise how else can the author know what they are writing is worth the while?

Author's Response: Everyone likes to know if they're doing a good job or not and reviews do just that. They boost our confidence and sometimes make us better writers. Sometimes friendships are born just because someone decided to leave feedback. You never know what will happen just by pressing that little button at the end of every story. Thank you for agreeing and for sharing your talent and your opinions. That's what it's all about.

Magic Man by L8Bleumr Rated: R [Reviews - 149]
Summary: COMPLETE - Do you ever wonder about the elusive strangers that help us in our most desperate time of need? Where do they come from and where do they disappear to? This is my story of one such stranger who turns out to be anything but. Rated R for Adult situations.
Categories: Off Topic
Characters: Legolas, Original Character, Thranduil
Genres: Friendship, Romance
Warnings: AU (alternate universe)
Series: None
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 75473 Read Count: 30429
[Report This] Published: 09/09/10 Updated: 02/11/10
Reviewer: EldarinPrincess Signed
Date: 26/11/10 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

As long as you leave the wildlife alone and don’t litter, I don’t see any reason you can’t hang around here--so precious :)

Author's Response: Thanks for reading this. Yes, our girl has a sense of humor. Hope you find this entertaining.

Thrill of the Chase by L8Bleumr Rated: NC-17 [Reviews - 16]
Summary: War is over, evil's been destroyed and Thranduil is on the hunt. It is the Fourth Age and the King needs something to occupy his time since there are no more spiders to hunt. He has set his eyes on a new victim, but this one will prove to be quite a challenge.
Categories: Off Topic
Characters: Original Character, Thranduil
Genres: Fantasy, Romance
Warnings: Graphic Sex
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 13487 Read Count: 5143
[Report This] Published: 05/10/10 Updated: 09/10/10
Reviewer: EldarinPrincess Signed
Date: 27/11/10 Title: Chapter 1: The Chase

There is a reason Thranduil is not mentioned in Tolkien's work; you have hit upon it directly.

Author's Response: I cannot help but picture him like this. It must be good to be the king.

Reviewer: EldarinPrincess Signed
Date: 29/11/10 Title: Chapter 5: The Final Battle

Oh boy....I think I discovered a renewable heat supply for the winter! It was beautifully written, and the musical inspiration was perfect!

Author's Response: I like your sense of humor. I owe the music to ladyjane. She gave me the inspiration to write this piece. There are so many songs that spark the imagination, very elvish in nature. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing this. It's nice to know there's another Thranduil enthusiast out there.

Taming The Wild by L8Bleumr Rated: NC-17 [Reviews - 176]
Summary: *COMPLETE* She was born with only one purpose, to fight. But when Legolas tries to harness her, she finds it difficult to submit for the sake of their love. She must stay true to her namesake. Rated for explicite adult (het) situations.
Categories: Book-verse, Movie-verse
Characters: Haldir, Legolas, Original Character, Orophin, Rúmil, The Fellowship, Thranduil
Genres: Action/Adventure, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Warnings: Character Death, Graphic Sex, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 118739 Read Count: 54606
[Report This] Published: 05/11/10 Updated: 21/03/11
Reviewer: EldarinPrincess Signed
Date: 21/02/11 Title: Chapter 33: Foresight

I always wonder what I would do if someone gave me a premonition of my future; I think it's best that I don't know. And here Legolas is faced with the very thing. He is very sweet in his message to Rhav. I wonder how he will feel when he sees her in Gondor.

Author's Response: I for one would not want to know. I deal better if I don't know as apposed to knowing and sweating it. And Galadriel's warning was kind of vague. It could have meant just about anything. So now begins a change in these two lovers.

Reviewer: EldarinPrincess Signed
Date: 21/02/11 Title: Chapter 31: Severed Bond

Haldir's death was very saddening. I like at the very end how he slips in that he loves Rhav, could be his last laugh eh? Because she can't really follow him now. Legolas' hurt at her not taking comfort in his arms is understandable, but right now Rhav is in a mess. Hopefully she can fix her wrongs with the Prince. Like how you summarized the battle nicely.

Author's Response: Yes, you could say that. Haldir got the last word in. And she would never admit to it (and would kick my butt for saying this) but I think she had feelings for him, somewhere buried deep. Though I would not call it love. And Rhav could not have gone to Legolas. He is a part of her mess as you say. Only Antien can comfort her right now.

Reviewer: EldarinPrincess Signed
Date: 21/02/11 Title: Chapter 32: Stolen Moments

LMAO (laughing my ass off)!!! How utterly awkward that moment was to the two friends! And Antien is a fiesty Elf who I still love dearly! How they can go on seeing each other without that scene going through their minds is going to be tough. Nice distraction for Rhav though. And the scene with her and Legolas is touching. He is still so amiable towards her, and she remains somewhat reserved. But a good start for them both.

Author's Response: I'm glad you got a kick out of this. Think of all the laughs those two will have over the years. "Hey Rhav, remember when you grabbed my..." "You know you liked it Antien." Antien is fiesty and if you want a good read, please check out the author 'aur'. She has written a piece for my two favorite oc's. It is perfectly Antien/Glandur. She is a very good friend and has done justice to these two. It's called 'A day or so in the life of Antien and Glandur'.

Reviewer: EldarinPrincess Signed
Date: 24/11/10 Title: Chapter 1: Not This Day

I enjoyed the chapter despite its short length. I can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response: Nice to meet you Eldarin Princess. I hope you enjoy this tale. Chapters will not always be this short and knowing my history, there will be plenty more.

Reviewer: EldarinPrincess Signed
Date: 27/11/10 Title: Chapter 11: The Prince's Best Day

Seems they are destined to be with each other. And I love the character of Antien. Hope to see more of him in the future.

Author's Response: Thanks for this. I have never included slash in any of my stories and was worried about how my het readers would feel, which is why I only mention it in passing. But as for this tale, I think it is best I concentrate mainly on him being Rhav's best friend. He will have more scenes in the future though.

Reviewer: EldarinPrincess Signed
Date: 30/11/10 Title: Chapter 12: Letting Go

It's hard for someone who has been pressed into a certain role to forget what it is they truly want. And for Legolas to insist she remain locked up, that is cruel indeed. But how can he understand? The roles of elleth and ellon always will remain. Rhavaniel is brave to swallow her pride and dreams and have gone on with her father's wishes. In this current day and age of self wishes, the small act of compromise is what truly saves the day, but what is now lost and forgotten. Wow, the last sentence came out too philosophical than intended.

I really enjoyed this chapter. :)

Author's Response: I think Legolas is just now realizing that there is more than friendship and desire for Rhav. He's falling in love and only wants to protect her, forgetting the fact that she can manage quite well on her own. She senses this and it's just a reminder of how the males want to suppress the females, not intensionally but out of love. It's a very fine line. She is also discovering something about herself. She is a born warrior and craves the kill. This new revelation is going to fuel her need to fight and cause havoc in the future. But for now she's doing what she thinks is right and putting aside her own wants. Thanks again for reading and the kind review.

Reviewer: EldarinPrincess Signed
Date: 03/12/10 Title: Chapter 13: A Begetting Day To Remember

They admitted their love, hooray.

Author's Response: Thanks. Some *ahem* (as we like to call it) on it's way.

Reviewer: EldarinPrincess Signed
Date: 05/12/10 Title: Chapter 14: When Hearts Collide

This was a great chapter. Rhav's uncertainties are still there, even though she thoroughly enjoyed the experience. And Legolas' embarassment was adoring, as well as his concern for his lady. Thank you for your description of this Prince.

Author's Response: I just had to make him have this awkward moment. It is their first time and it is not perfect as some might make it out to be. Besides, think of all the practice they will need. *wink wink*