Penname: L8Bleumr [Contact] Real name: Moe
Member Since: 02/09/09
Membership status: Member
Bio:
My name L8Bleumr describes me to a ‘T’. I have never been the first to try something or even know about its existence. I have only discovered my addiction for this genre within the past several years. I was quickly hooked and wanted more so I started writing and enjoy it very much.




My favorite human characters are Eowyn and Faramir. I like to imagine them as having a spicy romantic love life. To me, Eowyn is more real than the rest. She falls in love with someone who doesn’t return the same feelings (haven’t we all been down that road before). But when she finally finds her forever love, it was worth all the heartache she’d been put through.



My favorite non-humans are Legolas and Haldir (though any elf is a turn on); the characters not the actors, though their good looks undoubtedly inspired my imagination. It may be cliché to choose these two but since not much is known about either, it makes them great fanfic subjects.

My hobbies are reading/writing fan fiction, music (being a musician since I was 10)fishing and muscle cars.

Rock man avatar,

My most favorite place to visit is the Florida Keys. When everything else is changing, it is the one place that stays the same.

There will always be an old man fishing off a bridge. Sundry shops will always sell seashells, sponges and dried starfish. And the fishing stories will always be about the BIG one that got away.

I enjoy writing romance and the difficulties that go along with it. I love 'love' and having my characters express themselves. My stories are not for the faint of heart. The ones with an NC-17 rating are rated so because of explicit M/F love scenes and are to be taken seriously. If this does not appeal to you, please do not read.

I have never written anything before these stories here and apologize ahead of time to all you pros out there. I try very hard to correct any spelling errors and hope my structure and such are not too horrible. I hope you enjoy reading them as much as I have enjoyed writing them. And please review whether they are older stories or new. I always respond and appreciate any feedback.

All stories and authors in my favorites are highly recommended. So get out there and find your own favorites. There’s a lot of talent on this site to be discovered and remember to give them a review. It’s a great way to meet others like yourself and maybe strike up a friendship or two.
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Rise of Angmar by Barazinbar Rated: PG-13 [Reviews - 7]
Summary: Picking up where Gathering of the Nine left off, it is now the Third Age of Middle-Earth, the One Ring is lost, and Sauron is weakened. The Nazgul must go into hiding or be destroyed by the victorious Last Alliance. But vigilance cannot be maintained eternally, and evil in the form of Angmar returns, headed by the Morgoth-possessed Witch-King and his not-so-faithful lieutenant Khamul, who finds herself attracting all sorts of attention, from all the wrong people.
Categories: Book-verse
Characters: Balrog, Elrond, Feanor, Galadriel, Gandalf / Olorin, Glorfindel, Legolas, Maeglin, Morgoth / Melkor, Namo / Mandos, Nazgûl, Original Character, Other Canon Character, Saruman, Sauron, Smaug, Thranduil, Vaire, Witch King
Genres: General
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 62 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 71640 Read Count: 36439
[Report This] Published: 31/05/10 Updated: 13/11/10
Reviewer: L8Bleumr Signed
Date: 11/11/10 Title: Chapter 61: The Broken Line

Maybe it's just me because sometimes I have a sick and twisted sense of humor, but the first part of this chapter reminded me of Monty Python humor. And I mean this in a high form of a comment. Still reading and enjoying.

Author's Response: Excellent! It is truly the highest form of compliment to have one's work be reminiscent of Monty Python.

Memory by Vanwa Lullaby Rated: PG [Reviews - 2]
Summary: As time passes, memory fades, for everyone. But it never completely disappears. Writen in memory of my mom.
Categories: Book-verse
Characters: Legolas, Original Character, Thranduil
Genres: Family, Tragedy
Warnings: Character Death
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 941 Read Count: 603
[Report This] Published: 18/06/10 Updated: 18/06/10
Reviewer: L8Bleumr Signed
Date: 21/06/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I thought this was a very touching scene of Legolas remembering his mother and paying tribute to her.

Author's Response: thank you.

Heart of Stone by luthien85 Rated: NC-17 [Reviews - 71]
Summary:


The March warden of Lorien was never the proud and cold elf that he is now. An unexpected discovery scarred him forever, turning his heart into stone. Never again did he trust nor believed in the affairs of the heart.

Calavénë was the lady in waiting for Lady Galadriel. Her stature and purity were her pride and glory. She lost her heart to him through an unexpected twist of fate.

What will it take for Calavénë to convince Haldir of her love? What will Haldir make her wager in return for his trust?

This is Heart of Stone, the story of Haldir and Calavénë.
Categories: Movie-verse
Characters: Arwen, Elladan, Elrohir, Elrond, Eowyn, Eru / Iluvatar, Frodo, Galadriel, Gandalf / Olorin, Gimli, Glorfindel, Haldir, Legolas, Merry, Orcs/Uruk-Hai, Original Character, Orophin, Pippin, Rúmil, Sauron, The Fellowship
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Drama, Family, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort, Romance, Tragedy
Warnings: AU (alternate universe), Character Death, Graphic Sex
Series: None
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 114534 Read Count: 32648
[Report This] Published: 21/06/10 Updated: 11/08/10
Reviewer: L8Bleumr Signed
Date: 21/06/10 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Good start. Once again, you have my attention. Haldir always makes a good subject.

Author's Response: He does, doesnt he? i guess cos there's not much history behind him in tolkien's book. we are always curious about things we don't know

Reviewer: L8Bleumr Signed
Date: 24/06/10 Title: Chapter 3: Shaken

Bad, bad Haldir. You make him seem so cruel, in a good way. His response afterward was very mean. How dare he make her cry after giving her such pleasure.

Author's Response: I would rally like to think what Haldir did was an exaggerated response to what he was feeling. What was he feeling? I figured i'd leave the details to you guys. Haldir's personality in this story at times might seem a little out there but whose to say we won't act that way if we had the same experience he did. thank you for following this story too. I know my language can be a nightmare at times since English is not my native tongue. Still, it's no excuse. Will try to write better!

Reviewer: L8Bleumr Signed
Date: 25/06/10 Title: Chapter 4: Training ensues

The fact that he fessed up and took responsibility for his actions proves that he still has a heart. On the other hand, Calavene is still innocent because she could totally take advantage of the situation. At least that is how I view things. Looking forward to the next chpt. By the way, regaliaria's review cracks me up. 'Snake in his leggings', good one.

Author's Response: Yes he will definitely own up to the fact he did a mistake. He's the marchwarden. As for Calavénë, this new found pleasure will actually be the unravelling for her...

Reviewer: L8Bleumr Signed
Date: 07/07/10 Title: Chapter 5: Missing

I like that last quote. The poor girl could be bleeding to death or captured by Orcs for all he knows and he just calls her a nuisance. Such a Haldir moment. Good cliffhanger. Can't wait to see what happens next.

Author's Response: Well she did add the extra work for him lol. There's many layers to haldir and i hope in the next chapters perhaps i could introduce another side to the elusive elf

Reviewer: L8Bleumr Signed
Date: 09/07/10 Title: Chapter 6: Orcs' conversation

Close call with the Orcs. Sounds like Haldir is not going to be the master of his domain for long. I like how your story is unfolding. I just wanted to let you know that I'm leaving for vacation tomorrow and I don't know if I'll have internet where I'm going. So if you don't get a review from me in the next two weeks, I haven't forgotten. Keep up the good work. Your writing is improving quite a bit.

Author's Response: You'd be surprised how well Haldir can control himself. But when he comes undone he'll be dragging Calavene down with him. That's still along way to go. Lol need some character development for Haldir and to let Calavene shine for a bit. I will miss your reviews and have a pleasant vacation. Wish i could go on one too. My writing's improved? Thank you! That's so nice of you to say so. i have been searching for websites of Tolkien's work to familiarize with the words he used.

Reviewer: L8Bleumr Signed
Date: 11/07/10 Title: Chapter 7: Blames

Right now I am sitting on the balcony of my vacation apartment, looking out over the shallow ocean waters of the Florida Keys and reading your story. As you can tell, I have WIFI. I like where things are going. Elves and water are always a good combo. And the sound of the waves here are a great added effect. Can't wait to see what happens down by the river.

Author's Response: oooo..i'm so utterly jealous now..here i am slaving over my clerking sheet for my final exam with the doctor tomorrow...i need a vacay! Yes, water and elves are always a delicious combo. I'm glad you can find the time to review this. It means a lot. Have fun!

Reviewer: L8Bleumr Signed
Date: 11/07/10 Title: Chapter 8: All is forgotten

I love the back and forth angst between Hal and Cal. Great build up for whatever is to come. I really enjoyed this chapter and can't wait for more. I always wondered what Gimli said to Haldir. That really wasn't a nice thing to say to a guy with a bow. lol

Author's Response: I'm glad i could have cleared that up for you. I used some of the lines from the movie. Yeah, it wasn't a good thing to say to a guy with a bow but then again gimli has a big axe :P

Reviewer: L8Bleumr Signed
Date: 12/07/10 Title: Chapter 9: Dreams and Fantasies

Would you like me to send Nieriel over to 'take care of' your Haldir? lol Better yet, I think your Cal and my Cal just need to go out and have a beer. Great chapter. I'm excited to see what comes next.

Author's Response: Lol, im afraid your nieriel would feel overwhelmed with my Haldir :D yes, both the Cals should go out for a beer and have a looooooooong talk lol

Reviewer: L8Bleumr Signed
Date: 14/07/10 Title: Chapter 10: New Acquaintances

They're kissing, they're touching, they're moaning and then... it's over? What the... I loved it. Now who's the tease? Good one my friend. I'm on the edge of my seat. Can't wait for more.

Author's Response: i learned by reading from the best tease around *whistles and points finger at you

Reviewer: L8Bleumr Signed
Date: 16/07/10 Title: Chapter 11: Frodo Baggins

Great chapter. I feel bad for Calavene. Haven't we all taken the chance on revealing our feelings for someone only to be hurt? I feel her pain. Just to let you know, tomorrow we leave the Keys and I know for a fact I will have no internet until the middle of next week. I'll catch up with you then, hopefully. Can't wait to see what happens next. Give him hell Calavene!

Author's Response: this chapter infuses my own personal experience. i have been there before and it does hurt lol. i hope you have a safe journey home and will be looking forward to your new chapter

Reviewer: L8Bleumr Signed
Date: 26/07/10 Title: Chapter 12: So Comes the News

Wow. I have some catching up to do. So... Orophin is a peeping Tom and Haldir and Calavene have ME version of phone sex. I like it. But now I'm sad that their going to Helm's Deep. I'm trying really hard not to skip ahead and find out what happens to them. Good chapter.

Author's Response: Hehe... have fun reading! thanks for the review and yes... there is catching up to do

Reviewer: L8Bleumr Signed
Date: 26/07/10 Title: Chapter 13: Helm's Deep

This is the way it should have been. I never understood why Haldir was killed in the movie. What purpose did it have? I like where you are going with this though. I am anxious to read the next chapter but my eyelids are too heavy. Great reenactment of the battle at Helm's Deep.

Author's Response: Thank you :) i once read that Haldir's death was to represent the passing of the elves. i guess PJ had his reasons. rest first then read lol

Reviewer: L8Bleumr Signed
Date: 27/07/10 Title: Chapter 16: Getting to Know You

Well, I've gotten this far and it has been an enjoyable read. I love how Calavene cared for Haldir after he was wounded. Now they are sharing some much needed alone time together. I know she is deeply in love with him. I only hope he does not break her heart again. She has fallen hard for him. Great writing. I cannot wait to finally catch up.

Author's Response: I am glad you are enjoying the read so far. I cannot wait to hear what you think of the other chapters

Reviewer: L8Bleumr Signed
Date: 27/07/10 Title: Chapter 19: Realization

These last few chapters were excellent. My heart was breaking as Haldir listened to Mebedir tell him about the proposal. I knew things were about to spin out of control. And then when Calavene went to Haldir and gave herself to him I thought, 'now she's done it.' I was screaming for him to admit his love for her, but he passed out first. Now I cannot wait to see what happens next. It is all very exciting. Great writing luthien85. I'm enjoying it immensely.

Author's Response: Thank you for your kind reviews. I like to think i have a few surprises left in store. Stay tuned and i do hope you are entertained :)and call me kay :)

Reviewer: L8Bleumr Signed
Date: 28/07/10 Title: Chapter 20: The Road to Rivendell

I'm glad she made it to Imladris without incident. Haldir better get going. He needs to be with her. I won't relax until then. Darn those wargs.

Author's Response: it would be a while before he finds her. I guess the Valar wanted to teach something to both Calavene and Haldir :)

Reviewer: L8Bleumr Signed
Date: 29/07/10 Title: Chapter 21: Truth and Lies

If they do catch up to her, I can't wait to see how she will deal with lying to those in Rivendell. You are definitely weaving a tangled web, one that will be difficult for all to escape from. This story is coming along nicely.

Author's Response: i am at a plot junction now. to flee or stay... it is indeed a tangled web... but we will not hear from calavene for a bit hehe

Reviewer: L8Bleumr Signed
Date: 31/07/10 Title: Chapter 22: Visions of Pelennor

I am anxious to see if you will incorporate Haldir or Calavene into the mix somehow, though I know neither one is even close to the battle scene. And will Legolas play some part in finding her? You leave me wondering about which way your plot will go.

Author's Response: they won't be included in the battle...however the battle's outcome will affect the time of Haldir's arrival..thus..giving way for Legolas to enter the mix :D shh...i have given out a lot of spoilers to you...stay tuned and thank you for your review :)

Reviewer: L8Bleumr Signed
Date: 02/08/10 Title: Chapter 23: Triumph and Failure

ooo... Calavene gave them the slip. Haldir was so close too. Can't wait to see where she's run off to.

Author's Response: Well... she will run into some familiar faces..an offer will be made..one that is hard for her to refuse... stay tuned hehe