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His Eyes by luthien85 Rated: NC-17 [Reviews - 40]
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Carleena Romano is an aspiring actress. Having been raised in a family with some movie background, it was destined that she become one of the legends. Legends did start some where and Carleena finds herself working as an extra in a big budget Hollywood movie. Destiny however, had other plans for her, in a shape of a young, handsome actor named Orlando Bloom. Will fame finally make Carleena choose between what she wants and what she needs? Will she let a misunderstanding ruin her life?
Categories: Actor Fics Characters: Elijah Wood, Liv Tyler, Original Character, Orlando Bloom
Genres: Friendship, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Warnings: Graphic Sex
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 107904 Read Count: 33580
Published: Apr 29 2010 Updated: Jun 19 2010 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 24: Last Week In Tuscany Reviewer: L8Bleumr Signed
Yes, it was very satisfying and my name was spelled right, haha. Now it makes sense why she flew off the handles and disappeared after catching OB and Angela together. The ghosts from her past have finally caught up to her and she needed to deal with them. Loved the Chpt.
Date: May 31 2010
Title: Chapter 25: A word from the author Reviewer: L8Bleumr Signed
Sorry to hear you're not feeling well. It sucks to be sick. Hope you get better soon so you can continue with your story.
Date: Jun 03 2010
Title: Chapter 26: New York, I Love You! Reviewer: L8Bleumr Signed
This is definitely the best chapter by far. I loved how Carleena came around and realized what she has been missing is right in front of her. The play was a good dose of reality. But my favorite part was the way he proposed to her, the ring on the ice cream. Nice touch. I couldn't help but remember the night my husband proposed to me. Those are memories no one forgets. Well done.

Author's Response: thank you so much. I had hope the proposal scene sound believable since i myself have never been proposed to lol. The play is actually something i had experienced before. I had watched a play before that was really like my life and it prompted me into action. I'm glad you guys enjoyed it. I will write better!
Date: Jun 04 2010
Title: Chapter 27: Pre Oscars Jitters Reviewer: L8Bleumr Signed
Cute chapter. So the words out. I sense a controversy on the way. It's such a happy time in their lives but I just know their world is about to come crashing down. Their so happy and in love... and the baby. I almost can't look. I'll have to read the next chapter with my hand over my face, peeking through my fingers. I already feel the tension. I eagerly await the continuation.

Author's Response: The next few chapters will see the return of her parents in the picture. I wanted to tie that loose end and make her come full circle. Don't worry, a lot of excitement and thrilling things will take place lol
Date: Jun 10 2010
Title: Chapter 28: The Oscars' Curse Reviewer: L8Bleumr Signed
First of all, let me say I appreciate the fact that you didn't have Carleena win the Oscar. It makes the story so much more realistic. It's not a perfect world and I don't particularly like reading about one. So I'm reading along and feeling good and then... BOOM!!! I really didn't see it coming. I was busy thinking about her parents and the awards show. I'm on the edge of my seat and waiting anxiously. Excellent chapter. Great cliff hanger.

Author's Response: I felt it wasn't right for her to win. It was her first movie and i thought Liv and Orlando should be honoured since they have been in the business for a while now. I'm glad i'm making you wait on the edge of your seat. Stay tuned. All will be revealed!
Date: Jun 15 2010
Title: Chapter 29: Understanding the Revenge Reviewer: L8Bleumr Signed
Wow. That was a quick update. The suspense is killing me. It hurts to see Orlando so close to death. And now the baby may be at risk. Carleena is all stressed out. Well, at least Angela is dead. What comes around goes around. I eagerly await your update.

Author's Response: i was itching to finish the story! the climax had been in my head since earlier this week lol. next one will hopefully be later today
Date: Jun 16 2010
Title: Chapter 30: Hope Reviewer: L8Bleumr Signed
Oh, you had me going there. I thought for sure his spirit was visiting her one last time. I thought he was gone for sure. You had my heart pumping. Darn those doctors. It would have been awful for their son to grow up without his father. Hmmm... sounds familiar. (inside joke) Max is such a cute name, too. Can't wait to see how it ends.

Author's Response: I had a hard time writing this part. TO die or not to die, that is the question lol. It would have been satisfying on a literary stand point but i couldn't disappoint Orlando's fans. Plus i have not the heart to kill him. Thank you for following the story up till almost the end.
Date: Jun 18 2010
Summary: What once began as an innocent childhood friendship comes under threat as Arwen and Legolas realise that they yearn for something more. Amongst the turbulant years of the 3rd age, both encounter significant hurdles as they struggle to hide their desires.

This story also includes the twins and a couple of OCs. No slash. No crude language.

(Rating due to change in later chapters. However, as this content is not written, no absolute decision is to be made as of yet.)
Categories: Book-verse, Movie-verse Characters: Arwen, Elladan, Elrohir, Legolas, Original Character
Genres: Drama, Friendship, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 24268 Read Count: 9021
Published: May 08 2010 Updated: Jun 16 2011 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 12: Craggy Peaks Reviewer: L8Bleumr Signed
Hi there. Didn't want to let this slip by me without reviewing. Nice to see you back on the update list again. I love your dialog between characters. Arwen's innocence is very becoming of her. And Legolas, well what can I say. He is very sweet as he ponders his feelings, comparing them to the stars. I'm very curious about your oc's too, Herendil and Oloriel. I bet he needed some extra attention with that sponge bath *wink*. Nicely done. Looking forward to more. Welcome back.

Author's Response: Hey :) Yes, it has been the longest time since I have updated - have been really busy, let me tell you. I'm glad that you are still liking this, especially as I have spent so long away from it. I'm also glad you like the character's conversations - trying to imagine what they actually would say to each other can be slightly challenging at times. Yes, Oloriel and Herendil have been asking me for some more attention too, and I think I might just have to give it - I love them too much to deny them for too long!
Date: Jun 20 2011
Title: Chapter 8: Unruly Blossom Reviewer: L8Bleumr Signed
I for one am surprised there are not more reviews for this story. It is beautifully written, very professionally done. Stories like yours are the reason I decided to try writing my own. You have a great talent and I am glad you are sharing it. I've added it to my favorites. I love the story line and look forward to seeing the relationship between these two grow and mature together. The dialog is wonderful. The friendships are entertaining. Your descriptive writing makes me feel as if I were right there with them. I get such emotions from reading it. Keep writing this and I promise to keep reviewing. Please update soon.

Author's Response: You said that stories like mine kept you writing, well reviews like YOURS keep ME going :) Thankyou for your support, I'm sure you understand the pleasure that a review can give an author. I try my best with my stories, hoping that they don't turn cliched or dull. I'm currently halfway through the next chapter, so perhaps another update at the end of the week...LC
Date: Jul 26 2010
Title: Chapter 9: Stifling Blackness Reviewer: L8Bleumr Signed
You have made me fall in love with Legolas all over again. You've also given a new craving for protein. This chapter was well worth the wait. Very sexy to think of Legolas flirting in this way. I love the way you write. More, more, more!!

Author's Response: Thankyou for your review! It automatically brightens my day (or night, in this case). I had hoped that others would find the dinner scene enjoyable, as it was fun to write. Your enthusiasm spurs me on - perhaps I might update more frequently from now onwards! It's always good to know that your work is appreciated! xoxo LC
Date: Aug 07 2010
Title: Chapter 10: Hot Water Reviewer: L8Bleumr Signed
O... M... G... That was hot. I think I'm liking the story behind Oloriel and Herendil even better than Arwen and Legolas. If that's what you write for your second characters, I can't wait to see what's in store for the main ones. That was the most arousing sponge bath scene I've ever read. I bow down to you. Best chapter so far. More... and soon.

Author's Response: As always, I'm glad that you liked it. I wrote it last night (or then again, technically it was this morning) when I hadn't even planned to write anything at all. Had to do a bit of a spell check when I awoke this morning, but the story itself did not change :) Herendil and Oloriel are indeed having an easier run than Alar/Arwen/Legolas. And hot things are ahead, and in store for them, but do not ask me when, how or what exactly because I've only got the barest gist of it. As for updates, maybe this time next week. I've got to finish writing my essay now! LC
Date: Aug 13 2010
Title: Chapter 11: Towards The Mountains Reviewer: L8Bleumr Signed
You'll get nothing but good things from me. This chapter was full of emotion; anger, despair, friendship and even longing. Beautifully written and I love this last part with Legolas and Arwen running through the trees and settling in by the pond. Innocence can be so romantic.

Author's Response: I'm glad that you like it! Yes, I thought a bit of innocence was necessary, seeing that their relationship is more or less buit on a childhood friendship.
Date: Sep 12 2010
An Arranged Affair by luthien85 Rated: NC-17 [Reviews - 2]
Summary: Legolas had just returned from Minas Tirith with the battle scars evident in his heart. His father Thranduil, is very worried at the state of his only son. With the help of his advisor, Lyean, the found a way to help heal his son and make his heart whole again.
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Gimli, Legolas, Original Character, Thranduil
Genres: Erotica, Family, Romance
Warnings: AU (alternate universe), Graphic Sex
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3243 Read Count: 4791
Published: May 15 2010 Updated: May 15 2010 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: An Arranged Affair Reviewer: L8Bleumr Signed
Short and sexy. A good read. I was a little confused when she called him her husband, but I see where you were going with it.

Author's Response: i wanted to run away from the fan fic i had going. I wanted something sexy and has some family feel to it. Hope it wasn't too confusing
Date: May 17 2010
Summary: What went through Elrond's mind when he gave the only daughter he had to Aragorn? How deep was his love for the Evenstar? This story tells of the struggle a father has to face in the face of his child's mortality
Categories: Book-verse, Movie-verse Characters: Aragorn, Arwen, Asfaloth, Elrond, Gandalf / Olorin, Glorfindel, Legolas
Genres: Family, Hurt/Comfort
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2113 Read Count: 1313
Published: May 29 2010 Updated: May 29 2010 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Giving Her Away - A Father's Tale Reviewer: L8Bleumr Signed
I really like this story. You can see how it relates to every father giving away his little girl on her wedding day. Fortunately, most dads get to see her grow in her marriage for years to come, which is why it is so sad that Elrond sailed. Very good.

Author's Response: I wrote this story from a father's point of view. It intrigued me since i have made a decision in life that might deprive my dad of the opportunity to give me away. Yes, it is indeed sad to think Elrond will never know his grandchildren like the other grandfathers get to do. Thank you for your encouraging words!
Date: May 30 2010
Rise of Angmar by Barazinbar Rated: PG-13 [Reviews - 9]
Summary: Picking up where Gathering of the Nine left off, it is now the Third Age of Middle-Earth, the One Ring is lost, and Sauron is weakened. The Nazgul must go into hiding or be destroyed by the victorious Last Alliance. But vigilance cannot be maintained eternally, and evil in the form of Angmar returns, headed by the Morgoth-possessed Witch-King and his not-so-faithful lieutenant Khamul, who finds herself attracting all sorts of attention, from all the wrong people.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Balrog, Elrond, Feanor, Galadriel, Gandalf / Olorin, Glorfindel, Legolas, Maeglin, Morgoth / Melkor, Namo / Mandos, Nazgûl, Original Character, Other Canon Character, Saruman, Sauron, Smaug, Thranduil, Vaire, Witch King
Genres: General
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 62 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 71640 Read Count: 54720
Published: May 31 2010 Updated: Nov 13 2010 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 5: First Age Relic Reviewer: L8Bleumr Signed
This is an interesting story. I'm surprised to see you have not been reviewed yet. I will admit, I'm not too up on my First Age Middle Earth history so some of the places are a little confusing, but that's just me. I am anxious to see where this story goes. Am I right to assume that the Nazgul characters are all women? If so, that's a new twist. Good writing and I look forward to following along.

Author's Response: Thanks! Seven of the Nazgul are women in this. I decided to make the Witch-King male because that adds some tension with Khamul, who thinks she should be chief, and is also very annoyed that Sauron put a man in charge. The ninth Nazgul's also a man...I'm not sure why. Maybe it was for contrast between the Witch-King - who's fairly strong-willed - and the ninth Nazgul, who's weak and not all that smart. Thanks again for the review! I hope you enjoy the rest of the story!
Date: Jul 30 2010
Title: Chapter 39: War Resumed Reviewer: L8Bleumr Signed
First of all, I must apologize for not reviewing this in so long. It's my own fault that I've let your story get away from me. I have just now caught up and I am thoroughly enjoying this. It is like a Middle Earth history lesson along the way. As I said before, I am not up on my first age history so I greatly appreciate your chapter end notes. I think this is the first story I've read that featured the dark characters. As evil as they all are, I'm enjoying their interaction with each other. Khamul is wonderfully malicious and my favorite. Love her 'don't give a crap' attitude. You have managed to show us a side of the story that not many have touched on and I love to see how it all unravels. Great work and I'm looking forward to more, especially now that I'm caught up.

Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm so glad you're enjoying it!
Date: Sep 28 2010
Title: Chapter 44: The Seer Reviewer: L8Bleumr Signed
I am amazed at how much you know about these stories. I like how you even incorporate characters that were only mentioned in passing in the books. Nicely done once again.
Date: Oct 09 2010
Title: Chapter 55: The Battle of Fornost Reviewer: L8Bleumr Signed
Still reading and enjoying your work.
Date: Nov 01 2010
Title: Chapter 61: The Broken Line Reviewer: L8Bleumr Signed
Maybe it's just me because sometimes I have a sick and twisted sense of humor, but the first part of this chapter reminded me of Monty Python humor. And I mean this in a high form of a comment. Still reading and enjoying.

Author's Response: Excellent! It is truly the highest form of compliment to have one's work be reminiscent of Monty Python.
Date: Nov 11 2010
Memory by Vanwa Lullaby Rated: PG [Reviews - 2]
Summary: As time passes, memory fades, for everyone. But it never completely disappears. Writen in memory of my mom.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Legolas, Original Character, Thranduil
Genres: Family, Tragedy
Warnings: Character Death
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 941 Read Count: 848
Published: Jun 18 2010 Updated: Jun 18 2010 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: L8Bleumr Signed
I thought this was a very touching scene of Legolas remembering his mother and paying tribute to her.

Author's Response: thank you.
Date: Jun 20 2010
Heart of Stone by luthien85 Rated: NC-17 [Reviews - 72]
Summary:


The March warden of Lorien was never the proud and cold elf that he is now. An unexpected discovery scarred him forever, turning his heart into stone. Never again did he trust nor believed in the affairs of the heart.

Calavénë was the lady in waiting for Lady Galadriel. Her stature and purity were her pride and glory. She lost her heart to him through an unexpected twist of fate.

What will it take for Calavénë to convince Haldir of her love? What will Haldir make her wager in return for his trust?

This is Heart of Stone, the story of Haldir and Calavénë.
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Arwen, Elladan, Elrohir, Elrond, Eowyn, Eru / Iluvatar, Frodo, Galadriel, Gandalf / Olorin, Gimli, Glorfindel, Haldir, Legolas, Merry, Orcs/Uruk-Hai, Original Character, Orophin, Pippin, Rúmil, Sauron, The Fellowship
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Drama, Family, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort, Romance, Tragedy
Warnings: AU (alternate universe), Character Death, Graphic Sex
Series: None
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 114534 Read Count: 47861
Published: Jun 21 2010 Updated: Aug 11 2010 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Prologue Reviewer: L8Bleumr Signed
Good start. Once again, you have my attention. Haldir always makes a good subject.

Author's Response: He does, doesnt he? i guess cos there's not much history behind him in tolkien's book. we are always curious about things we don't know
Date: Jun 21 2010
Title: Chapter 3: Shaken Reviewer: L8Bleumr Signed
Bad, bad Haldir. You make him seem so cruel, in a good way. His response afterward was very mean. How dare he make her cry after giving her such pleasure.

Author's Response: I would rally like to think what Haldir did was an exaggerated response to what he was feeling. What was he feeling? I figured i'd leave the details to you guys. Haldir's personality in this story at times might seem a little out there but whose to say we won't act that way if we had the same experience he did. thank you for following this story too. I know my language can be a nightmare at times since English is not my native tongue. Still, it's no excuse. Will try to write better!
Date: Jun 23 2010
Title: Chapter 4: Training ensues Reviewer: L8Bleumr Signed
The fact that he fessed up and took responsibility for his actions proves that he still has a heart. On the other hand, Calavene is still innocent because she could totally take advantage of the situation. At least that is how I view things. Looking forward to the next chpt. By the way, regaliaria's review cracks me up. 'Snake in his leggings', good one.

Author's Response: Yes he will definitely own up to the fact he did a mistake. He's the marchwarden. As for Calavénë, this new found pleasure will actually be the unravelling for her...
Date: Jun 24 2010
Title: Chapter 5: Missing Reviewer: L8Bleumr Signed
I like that last quote. The poor girl could be bleeding to death or captured by Orcs for all he knows and he just calls her a nuisance. Such a Haldir moment. Good cliffhanger. Can't wait to see what happens next.

Author's Response: Well she did add the extra work for him lol. There's many layers to haldir and i hope in the next chapters perhaps i could introduce another side to the elusive elf
Date: Jul 06 2010
Title: Chapter 6: Orcs' conversation Reviewer: L8Bleumr Signed
Close call with the Orcs. Sounds like Haldir is not going to be the master of his domain for long. I like how your story is unfolding. I just wanted to let you know that I'm leaving for vacation tomorrow and I don't know if I'll have internet where I'm going. So if you don't get a review from me in the next two weeks, I haven't forgotten. Keep up the good work. Your writing is improving quite a bit.

Author's Response: You'd be surprised how well Haldir can control himself. But when he comes undone he'll be dragging Calavene down with him. That's still along way to go. Lol need some character development for Haldir and to let Calavene shine for a bit. I will miss your reviews and have a pleasant vacation. Wish i could go on one too. My writing's improved? Thank you! That's so nice of you to say so. i have been searching for websites of Tolkien's work to familiarize with the words he used.
Date: Jul 08 2010