Reviews by Luna
Summary: What would have happened if everyone had cell phones? Here is a silly story about what would have happened if they all had phones. :)
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: The Fellowship
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3995 Read Count: 4727
Published: Jul 22 2008 Updated: Feb 14 2009 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Part one Reviewer: Luna Signed
Aragorn texted everyone he knew: Gandalf died :(

,,, HILARIOUS. love it. glad Boromir was kept alive :)

Author's Response: lol I know. He has to be in ALL of my stories!!! XD He's just so fun to write about... Xd Thank you for reading my ff!
Date: Feb 14 2009
Summary: If you think you are obsessed with Legolas than check this out!
Categories: Off Topic Characters: None
Genres: Other
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 452 Read Count: 2232
Published: Oct 20 2008 Updated: Oct 20 2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Legolas obsession Reviewer: Luna Signed
lol... and just how many of these do you qualify for?

I think, at one point or another from high school till now (but mostly H.S) I have done about 14 of these things *teehee*

Author's Response: I have done 45 of them but whose counting! Lol! Thanks for reviewing! lovelovelove legolas
Date: Mar 28 2009
Summary: Legolas is MINE!! Who here will fight me for him?
Categories: Off Topic Characters: Legolas, Original Character
Genres: Fantasy, General
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4307 Read Count: 11578
Published: Nov 23 2008 Updated: Mar 28 2009 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 8: The Rules of the Dance-Off... and a Surprise Guest! Reviewer: Luna Signed
Kitt: Haha! I'm glad you thought it was funny, even if you didn't know him. Dr. Phil was featured on Oprah Winfrey's show for quite a while and at some point housewives loved him so much he got his own afternoon program talking about feelings and other silly things like that. Even more scary: His shiny bald head and mustache *cowers in fear*
Date: Mar 27 2009
Title: Chapter 7: Luna, Most Fierce & Awesome Super Ninja, Steps In! Reviewer: Luna Signed

Feedback makes me happy *Wide, goofy smile* And it makes me feel like dancing! *Starts to do Thriller*

Funniness: Fei, the other night when I couldn't sleep and read your game show story I remembered this fic and when I was trying to to sleep I thought of this story (Ninja-ness, Five Point Touch, and Dance-Off) and I felt the need to write it, although I was wondering if anyone would notice since its been a long time since the last update. But I'm glad I fired up the paddles and shocked the dying patient!

@ Shadow Maiden: I'm glad you think it was hysterical *joins you in hysterical laughter*

@Henoluin_Elsilim: you should def contribute! Though... I don't know if I want more competition for my beloved *Ponders* Yeah, you should do it :)

@ Fei: Yay! Glad you liked my humor :) Does skipping count as dancing... Thats a tough one. So I'm going to compromise and say YES, but only if you hum while you do it so it seems musical :)

@ Kitt: I love crazy shoes... But really do lack the required coordination *sighs*

I've been thinking about dance-off possibilities, but still haven't stumbled upon anything bootylicious enough for a Legolas battle.
Date: Mar 27 2009
Title: Chapter 9: Caller vs. Fei Reviewer: Luna Signed
A digital ice cream gun???

Niiiiiiiiiiiiiice :)

(Any way to fix this though, its all in one paragraph and hard to read*pouts*)
Date: Mar 28 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Intro Reviewer: Luna Signed
This was a fun read! MMM Legolas... Is there anything better to fight for? :)

Author's Response: *Ponders*Chocolate? Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, it was great fun to write! Dae and Kitt are the best! I remember this story started when Shadow Maiden and I began to fight about Legolas (as most Fangirls do)—she threatened fight me in an arena and I said I’d get Prince Nuada to beat her down, and, well, things escalated from there and formed this. If you would like to view more random humor fights by Shadow Maiden, Kitt Otter, and I—then check out Shadow Maiden’s, “The Snowball Fight to Remember.” This is nothing compared to that. Feel free to add to this if you want to! Peace, Fei.
Date: Feb 28 2009
Summary: The three portions of this story summed up to create the Last Chronicle. Twilight crossover
Categories: Book-verse, Crossovers Characters: Aragorn, Elladan, Elrohir, Elrond, Irmo / Lorien, Legolas, Namo / Mandos, Orcs/Uruk-Hai, Original Character
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Drama, Romance, Tragedy
Warnings: AU (alternate universe), Character Death, Violence
Series: Lira's Chronicles
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5617 Read Count: 4268
Published: Dec 27 2008 Updated: Dec 27 2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 2: Battle Part 2 Reviewer: Luna Signed
wooo twilight crossover ;)

Author's Response: i'm glad you like it ^L^ A couple of my other stories are twilight crossovers, Eternal Nights is and I think there's a bit of twilight in The Demon Hunters of Arda if you're looking for more. Thanks for reviewing anyway - Li
Date: Oct 12 2009
Summary: I think the title explains it all.
Categories: Off Topic Characters: Aragorn, Arwen, Asfaloth, Bilbo, Boromir, Celeborn, Celebrían, Eldarion, Elladan, Elrohir, Elrond, Galadriel, Haldir, Merry, Nazgûl, Other Canon Character, Sam, Saruman, Sauron, The Fellowship, Witch King
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, Fantasy, General, Humor, Mystery, Other, Parody, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 13470 Read Count: 46595
Published: Jan 09 2009 Updated: Jun 21 2010 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 2: Entry 2 Reviewer: Luna Signed
LOL!! This is such a cute story you have going on! 'He's cute'. hahahaha

Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you like it!
Date: Jan 18 2009
Title: Chapter 13: Entry 13 Reviewer: Luna Signed
I freaking love this line:

Then she leaned forward and whispered in my ear that Glorfindel is horrible at arithmatic.



Author's Response: It was fun writing that, haha. Thanks for the review, it made me smile!
Date: Feb 20 2009
Title: Chapter 31: June 2508, Third Age Reviewer: Luna Signed
I really, REALLY love this fic. How you describe things from Arwen's point of view and the queen blushing for love as the sunset... Amazing. You m'dear are a genius!

Author's Response:

Thank you! I feel like Arwen doesn't get much credit in the character department...I've always wondered what it was like from her point of view and decided to write about it. I'm so glad that you like the story, it's reviews like yours that keep me writing. Thanks for taking the time to give me feedback!

And I'm not a genius! Just creative and bored.

Date: Jul 27 2009
Title: Chapter 32: June 2508, Third Age Reviewer: Luna Signed
i really heart your descriptions :)

Author's Response: Aw, thank you!
Date: Aug 05 2009
Summary: For anybody else who has ever felt that they need to hide their fanfic habit. Rated PG for one instance of bad language.
Categories: Off Topic Characters: None
Genres: Essay
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10094 Read Count: 18818
Published: Feb 08 2009 Updated: Oct 14 2010 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Narya's thoughts Reviewer: Luna Signed
Thank you Narya! The past couple months I've been getting back into fanfic after a long hiatus and forgot how much I really enoy it. But I have not told ANY of my friends about my latest guilty pleasure in fear of what you had to deal with. I do feel like fanfic is something to be ashamed of: people see it as geeky, a silly waste of time, and assume all the stories involve crazy elf sex (well ok... that does happen).

But some of the writing on this site is far better than some of the novels I've read! I'm still not finished with Elaura's Book 3 but its a great example of fanfiction breaking the stereotypes. Her story, like many others, give such depth to the characters through brilliant writing that it seems offensive that we should feel ashamed to be reading it.

Its nice to read your thoughts that are similar to my own- I'm glad someone thought to post on this topic!

Author's Response: Hi Luna - thanks for your response! I haven't read Elaura's stories, though they have been recommended to me; I must get round to it at some stage. You're absolutely right, it is almost insulting that people would feel ashamed to read some of the excellent stories on this site. Feel free to add your own rant!
Date: Feb 09 2009

A ring can represent practically anything. Undying love, a silent promise, real friendship, commitment, but also nobility, worship or faith. There are rings that symbolize dependence, enslavement, eternity, and apparently there is one that stands for all that’s evil in this world. But let’s not forget a ring is nothing more than a piece of metal that fits nicely around a finger. It doesn’t even have to be pretty.

So don’t ask me why I ended up risking my life, going on this quest to destroy one. I mean, you can’t really blame me for getting caught up in things I don’t even believe in, right?

Be warned: this is a tenth walker fic and English is my second language. It’s possible you’ll hate this story, but don’t forget you’re not legally obliged to do so. And seriously, I really like readers and absolutely love reviewers.

Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Aragorn, Boromir, Frodo, Gandalf / Olorin, Gimli, Legolas, Merry, Original Character, Pippin, Sam
Genres: Action/Adventure, General, Romance
Warnings: AU (alternate universe), First Draft
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 60019 Read Count: 67112
Published: Mar 04 2009 Updated: Jan 24 2015 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2 Reviewer: Luna Signed
I saw that English is not your first language, but I think it is very well written regardless. As someone else observed, there are many native speakers of English who cannot write as well! When it comes to 10th walker stories I'm pretty skeptical, but so far I am enjoying your tale.

Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing. I'm glad you have enjoyed it this far, I hope it won't become a dissapointment in the future.
Date: Mar 26 2009
Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18 Reviewer: Luna Signed
Stumbled across your story and I must say, I enjoyed the way you addressed the mortal-elf love in Aragorn and Legolas' conversation. Quite nice!

Author's Response: I am glad you did stumble across this story! Thanks for reading and for reviewing. I am glad you liked their conversation!
Date: Aug 28 2009
Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19 Reviewer: Luna Signed

Basically I am adoring this story! Hilarious and charming :)

Author's Response: Thank you for leaving a second review, before I even reacted to your first! I am always really glad to know when someone likes my story!
Date: Aug 28 2009
Instinct by Anwyn Rated: PG-13 [Reviews - 11]
Summary: Victoria Wright is a sucessful Animal Rights Lawyer with a reputation of incarcerating those guilty of Animal Abuse.

In one fateful moment Victoria's career would take a most unforseen turn.
Categories: Off Topic Characters: Original Character
Genres: Action/Adventure, Fantasy, Other
Warnings: AU (alternate universe), Violence
Challenges: Animal Transformations
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 5604 Read Count: 5384
Published: May 16 2009 Updated: Jul 26 2009 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Viscious Reviewer: Luna Signed
Wow! You really pulled me into this story! Great job.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! It is a such an incredible compliment to hear that a reader has been pulled into a story and I am so pleased to hear you are enjoying it :)
Date: Jul 26 2009
Summary: All the criminal offeses have been piled up against an unsuspecting fanfic writer. Petty theft of originality, 10th walker overkill, Mary Sue overkill, and the likes. Can she survive where fanfic goes to die?
Categories: Off Topic Characters: Aragorn, Balrog, Bilbo, Bill the Pony, Boromir, Elrond, Ents, Eru / Iluvatar, Faramir, Frodo, Gandalf / Olorin, Gil-Galad, Gimli, Gollum, Haldir, Isildur, Legolas, Merry, Nazgûl, Orcs/Uruk-Hai, Original Character, Pippin, Sam, Sméagol
Genres: General, Humor, Parody
Warnings: AU (alternate universe)
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 19166 Read Count: 20033
Published: Jul 18 2009 Updated: Sep 12 2009 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 2: Forever Everlasting Fellowship Reviewer: Luna Signed
hahaha... toooo funny

Author's Response: thanks!
Date: Jul 23 2009
Title: Chapter 7: Elassa'_babe's Sentence Reviewer: Luna Signed
i like this story... I wonder what Bree's sister will do.

Author's Response: Glad you like it, let's just say Bree is in for it! ;P
Date: Aug 06 2009

Bloopers happen, it's a part of the movie-making process. Lord of the Rings, epic as it is, is no exception. Here's a list of humorous sights I've seen during the films!

Categories: Movie-verse, Off Topic Characters: None
Genres: General, Humor
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 717 Read Count: 1785
Published: Aug 04 2009 Updated: Aug 04 2009 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Wait, What? Reviewer: Luna Signed

*giggle* VERY Amusing... I have not noticed many of these. Of course, its usually because I am jumping up and down with glee... except during sad, death scenes. Then I just hold my blankie *Poor Gandalf, Haldir*


Author's Response:

You're welcome, Luna! I used to be deathly afraid of Gollum, so I would bring my stuffed animal down to hold whenever I watched the movies at home. Not scared of him any more, but sometimes it's nice just to have a comfort thing around.

I'm glad that this was amusing. I hoped that it would be! In such spectacular films, bloopers seem to be really hard to spot. There were others that I found, but they were really very technical, like swords being worn on the left instead of the right, broaches that were facing right instead of left, hobbits switching positions behind a log, Frodo's fingernails randomly altering length...

You get the idea. :-) Please chip in if you find any more!

Date: Aug 04 2009
Summary: The West has fallen, Sauron rules Arda, and a lone Elf seeks knowledge for the future. In the Dark Days following the Fall, some still survive, by the strength of their hearts and thier backs. These are their stories.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Aragorn, Arwen, Bilbo, Boromir, Celeborn, Denethor, Elladan, Elrohir, Elrond, Eomer, Eowyn, Faramir, Frodo, Galadriel, Gandalf / Olorin, Gimli, Gollum, Gríma, Halbarad, Haldir, Legolas, Merry, Mouth of Sauron, Orcs/Uruk-Hai, Original Character, Pippin, Sam, Saruman, Sauron, The Fellowship, Théoden
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Drama, Horror, Tragedy
Warnings: AU (alternate universe), Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1240 Read Count: 2878
Published: Aug 19 2009 Updated: Aug 19 2009 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: A Warning to the Reader: Indifferent Death Reviewer: Luna Signed
wow... this is beautifully written! I think this story will be sad, buit sounds very interesting.
Date: Aug 20 2009
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter One: The Dark Places of Arda Reviewer: Luna Signed
wow...this is very very VERY sad
Date: Aug 20 2009
Summary: I think this speaks for itself.
Categories: Off Topic Characters: None
Genres: Angst, Essay, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 382 Read Count: 1341
Published: Aug 26 2009 Updated: Aug 26 2009 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: The Musings of a Broken Heart Reviewer: Luna Signed

I'm thirding the *hugs*. If this happened to you, I wish you well on your journey to get through this moment. I do appreciate how you describe the feelings, particularly in the 1st and 3rd paragraph.

~Take care~

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the kind review. It's easier to write about something like this when you're actually going through it...and this experience will be good to look back on for future writing reference.  Thanks for the hugs and reassurance.
Date: Aug 26 2009
Summary: A spoof of the movie. Ever wondered why Legolas' hair was so fine? Find out here.
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: None
Genres: Humor, Parody
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 882 Read Count: 1141
Published: Sep 02 2009 Updated: Sep 02 2009 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: The Lord of the Hair Things Reviewer: Luna Signed
ha. cute title and story. i like mocking the fellowship :)

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! My sister said it was cute, too. It's one of those stories where the reader sees what really goes on with the Fellowship behind the scenes. ;-) ~Katrina Mae
Date: Sep 03 2009
Sometimes by Daewen Rated: PG [Reviews - 4]
Summary: Sometimes you infuriate me - but you can't stop yourself.
Categories: Book-verse, Off Topic Characters: Elladan, Original Character
Genres: Poetry, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 155 Read Count: 1468
Published: Sep 12 2009 Updated: Sep 12 2009 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Sometimes Reviewer: Luna Signed

Enjoyed this short poem! i too like the :

You take my weapon away, fling it into the oak.
It trembles like my body in your arms.

Nice :)

Author's Response: :) Perfect description, isn't it?
Date: Sep 12 2009
Nîn Óre (My Heart) by Mari Rated: PG-13 [Reviews - 14]
Summary: Suki is an average high school student where half her teachers like her and half don't. But what happens when a dark blue eyed boy with odd ears appears with other odd people?
Categories: Crossovers Characters: Aragorn, Arwen, Frodo, Gandalf / Olorin, Gimli, Legolas, Merry, Original Character, Pippin, Sam
Genres: Romance
Warnings: AU (alternate universe)
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 15107 Read Count: 10017
Published: Oct 02 2009 Updated: Sep 14 2010 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3-Freak Out Reviewer: Luna Signed


'Legolas was sitting at the kitchen table with a very confused look while he thought, ‘How did we get here…I want to go back…but yet I don’t…I want to learn more about here…and more about Suki…I don’t know why but I feel a strange connection to her…I wonder how she feels about me…I mean us…yeah us.’ '

Author's Response: I am glad you enjoed that part. :)
Date: Oct 08 2009