Reviews by Narya
Summary: Alianariasėaefala Oenalarsafalothanarien Jaharanalercotania is the most beautiful girl in all of Middleearth. As are Zenara Warrior Princess Ranger of the North, Brittney Julia Rebecca Mary Sue Sarah Brianna Forest, and Aquamarine Moonbeam Sunlight Stardust Flowerpetal Fairyglitter Waterstone Firebird. They are slowly taking over the world . . . and none have the power to stop them . . . except for one.
Enter Gimli Son of Gloin.
Categories: Book-verse, Movie-verse Characters: Gimli, Original Character, The Fellowship
Genres: Action/Adventure, Horror, Humor, Parody
Warnings: Torture
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1425 Read Count: 2742
Published: Jan 04 2008 Updated: Jan 04 2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: "Not more of them!" Reviewer: Narya Signed
Nice job Freya; this is really funny :) several different types of Mary Sue in one story...my eyes ache from the beauty...well done.

Author's Response: Thanks! The most fun was trying to think of a sue, and then think up the names... :D
Date: Feb 13 2009
Summary: I wrote this for a Tolkien class I took in the Spring of 2007. It wound up getting me a 4.0 in the class too! :D Anyway, it's a oneshot about Boromir and Faramir when they were younger, and how their relationship was.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Boromir, Faramir
Genres: Angst, Drama
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1783 Read Count: 4470
Published: Jan 08 2008 Updated: Jan 08 2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Narya Signed
That made me cry. It's not something a lot of writers manage, believe me. Sibling stories always have a big effect on me as I'm extremely close to my own brother and sister, and you wrote so convincingly of Boromir and Faramir's bond. Also, your portrayal of Boromir himself was excellent; too many fanfics paint him as a straightforward villain, which does him a huge disservice.

Thank you for this. Take care,
Narya
Date: Feb 18 2009
Summary: A short poem.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: None
Genres: Poetry
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 76 Read Count: 1772
Published: Mar 31 2008 Updated: Mar 31 2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: GONDOR Reviewer: Narya Signed
I like this a lot. Your depiction of Gondor inspires a real sense of pride and awe in the reader; nice work!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm always a little iffy about letting people read my poetry so your review helps me a feel better about it. =)
Date: Mar 23 2009
Heart of Rhūn by Formegil Rated: PG-13 [Reviews - 24]
Summary: Two thieves and foster-brothers from Minas Anor get the job of their lives when they are hired to steal the legendary Heart of Rhūn. Or so they thought... The quest proves to be harder than they ever expected, sending them on an eventful and dangerous journey across Middle-Earth. The story starts in late 1304 Third Age (1700 years pre-LOTR).
14/06/2009 - This story is nominated for Middle-Earth Fanfiction Awards (MEFA) 2009 competition.


Categories: Book-verse Characters: Gandalf / Olorin, Original Character
Genres: Action/Adventure, General
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 96924 Read Count: 37380
Published: Jul 01 2008 Updated: Aug 05 2011 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Stranger in the Night Reviewer: Narya Signed
I don't think the idea of a Thieves' Guild is particularly far-fetched; I like it as a concept :)

I see this got nominated for a MEFA - congratulations!! How did you do, if you don't mind me asking?

Author's Response: Oh, I don't mind in the least. Frankly, I didn't do too well, since my story was the last one in its category. I don't feel bad about that, though. My competitors were quality writers and I felt honoured enough when my story got nominated. I also suppose it would have been too ambitious to expect an award from the first ever writing competition I entered.
Date: Feb 01 2010
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Sarge's Visit Reviewer: Narya Signed
Nicely nicely...I enjoy reading about OCs and areas of Middle-earth that Tolkien didn't give us much canon info on. You've created your own little "world-within-a-world" here, which I love; you evoke the atmosphere of working-class Minas Anor perfectly, and I'm enjoying the banter between the two brothers. Well done.

Author's Response: Ah, so I succeeded in what I was trying. I went purposely for more gritty and vulgar atmosphere than in Tolkien's writing. The old Professor was a wonderful writer, but to my tastes he didn't give enough space to the average man of the street of Gondor or Rohan. I mean, we learned more even of the lives and attitudes of the Orcs! When it comes to dialogue, it's sometimes a sort of Achilles' heel for me. At times I tend to write it too heavy and preachy, so I give special attention to it. It's a particular challenge to give every character his/her own "voice", but a challenge I really enjoy.
Date: Feb 01 2010
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: An Unexpected Visitor Reviewer: Narya Signed
He wondered again why a fortune-teller or magician had to be dressed like a fool to be believed

This made me giggle!

I'm sorry I've come to this story so late; I kept seeing the summary and meaning to read it, but other things always seemed to get in the way. Anyhow, I've got a bit of time now, so I can work through :) I'm enjoying it so far; I love your characters, and the sense of humour in the tale!

Author's Response: No reason to be sorry, I'm always glad to have new readers. I'm happy that the story is to your liking. As for the characters, I strive to make my characterization believable and as non-Sueish as possible. It's actually more fun to write that way. Also, sometimes I can't resist putting a little pun or gibe in the narrative. Sort of lightens the mood IMHO.
Date: Feb 01 2010
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: The King of Pentacles Reviewer: Narya Signed
Oooh. Creepy. Falasmir's collections were most unnerving; I love the way you build atmosphere in this story, I had goosebumps for much of this chapter.

I also enjoyed the brothers' nostalgia for their home in Chapter 4 - a nice touch that added depth to both their characters.

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! Chapter 5 was definitely one of the most fun to write this far. At first I feared Falasmir was a bit over the top, but it seems many readers like him. I originally intended to make him less psychotic, but this version was more intriguing.
Date: Feb 04 2010
Orc Talk! by Kitt Otter Rated: PG half-star [Reviews - 9]
Summary: Young Legolas learns a new word and his older brother learns to be more prudent. MEFA 2008 Nominee.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Legolas, Thranduil
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1721 Read Count: 2637
Published: Jul 03 2008 Updated: Jul 03 2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Orc Talk! Reviewer: Narya Signed
"The others murmured in grim agreement – never minding none of them had ever seen an Orc up close."

LOL - sounds like a lot of guys I know at uni (though generally they aren't talking about Orcs ;-D )

A sweet little short fic, and I loved the ending. Well done.

Author's Response: Heehee. Uni guys... Yeah, the adolescent Elves were modeled largely on my brothers; honestly, the things they'll say when they think no one's listening... Danke for reading! Finding this review was a nice surprise. :D
Date: May 15 2009
Summary: In Moria, Legolas takes his watch and something watches him. MEFA 2008 nominee.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Aragorn, Gollum, Legolas
Genres: Drama
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 725 Read Count: 2477
Published: Jul 03 2008 Updated: Jul 03 2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Hidden Watcher Reviewer: Narya Signed
Oooh...creepy stuff, very atmospheric! Well done.

Author's Response: I hoped to make it a little creepy. Thanks! Now the way Tolkien did it always gave me the creeps: tons of rock over their head in abandoned mines Gandalf knows well is overrun by demons and one wrong step and they could be lost forever… and then they hear a distant doom, doom… Sorry ramble. *g* I appreciate your comments. -Kitt
Date: Nov 25 2008
Difficult by meerkatalex Rated: PG-13 [Reviews - 10]
Summary: This is just an attempt at what happened after that big battle when Merry defeated that Witch-King. What if there were side-effects? Pippin will find it difficult to bear the consequences and Merry will feel vulnerable. Sequel up soon!
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Aragorn, Eowyn, Faramir, Merry, Pippin
Genres: Angst, Drama, General, Tragedy
Warnings: AU (alternate universe), Violence
Series: Cute Merry-Pippin stories!
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1920 Read Count: 2044
Published: Jul 06 2008 Updated: Jul 06 2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Merry awakes. Reviewer: Narya Signed
Yes, you have captured the characters perfectly, not just "alright" :-) I loved the Faramir/Eowyn moment (two of my favourite characters there!) and the part about Farmer Maggot giving the hobbits free carrots made me chuckle.

There are a couple of little spelling nitpicks, but they're few and very minor, more a job for a beta reader than a casual reviewer; overall this is a wonderful little one-shot, touching and sensitive. I think you've depicted Pippin's anxiety and the bond between the two hobbits in an extremely realistic way; Merry's fears for Pip brought a lump to my throat. I also think you've written the voices of all the characters accurately as well - they sound like they do in the book, whereas too many authors put modernisms and awkward phrasing into their mouths. You've avoided this trap and told a lovely story. Well done.

Author's Response: Aw, thank you for the review Narya! The constructive critisism is welcomed with open arms; and I'm glad you enjoyed it! Again, thanks for reviewing and I hope you enjoy my other stories!

Author's Response: Aw, thank you for the review Narya! The constructive critisism is welcomed with open arms; and I'm glad you enjoyed it! Again, thanks for reviewing and I hope you enjoy my other stories!
Date: May 03 2009
Summary: A poem on eowyn's thoughts throughout the two towers and return of the king.
Categories: Book-verse, Movie-verse Characters: Eowyn
Genres: Poetry
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1260 Read Count: 2255
Published: Sep 01 2008 Updated: Sep 01 2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Narya Signed
Hi, elfenears! Nice to see you did post some of your work in the end, I hoped you would after I read your review for "In Defence of What We Do."

I see you're from Leeds - do you mean Leeds in the UK? If you do, that's where I was born :) I'm living in Scotland at the moment though.

Anyway, about your poem - I liked it. Eowyn is one of my favourite characters, but that wasn't the only reason; you've clearly got a strong grip on her personality and thoughts, and I felt the last two stanzas in particular showed a lot of insight into her feelings. In places I felt that you almost wanted to go into prose, though, and in places your tenses were slightly mixed up, but nothing too serious - that's the kind of thing that improves with practice.

A really good job for your first poem. I'll definitely keep my eyes open for your stuff in the future.

Author's Response: yes City of Leeds, i'm a Yorkshire lass. glad you liked my poem, i've always loved the character of eowyn and wanted to write about her ever since i first read the books. i'll work on improving and should be posting some stories in the near future. thanks for the review x
Date: Feb 16 2009
Summary: Legolas and Arwen have been friends since infancy. They discuss thoughts and fears under a moonlit sky.
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Arwen
Genres: General
Warnings: First Draft
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 866 Read Count: 2726
Published: Sep 17 2008 Updated: Nov 01 2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Narya Signed
Hi, just wanted to say well done with this; you have a real way with words and your descriptive passages are gorgeous. Something to bear in mind for your next post, though - be careful with your capital letters. I'm sure when you omit them it's just a typo, but it looks slightly jarring on the page...well, screen, I suppose.

I liked this a lot though, xFanarix is right, you do have a gift. It would be good to see more from you soon - I'll keep my eyes open for your stuff.

Take care.

Author's Response: Thank you very much! It's great to hear from you.I'm hoping to post more soon. Thanks again!
Date: Nov 25 2008
Summary: The top 5 most annoying things for characters from LOTR.
Categories: Movie-verse, Crossovers Characters: Aragorn, Arwen, Balrog, Boromir, Elrond, Frodo, Gandalf / Olorin, Gimli, Legolas, Merry, Pippin, Sam, The Fellowship
Genres: Parody
Warnings: None
Series: Parodies
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 632 Read Count: 24877
Published: Sep 24 2008 Updated: Jan 11 2009 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 3: Five Ways to Annoy Gimli Reviewer: Narya Signed
Gimli as Sanat - I love it!!!
Date: Oct 28 2008
Title: Chapter 1: Five Ways to Annoy Legolas Reviewer: Narya Signed
Oops, I meant Santa. *Blush*

Author's Response: te he he, yeah Gimli's face would be sooooo funny!
Date: Oct 28 2008
Summary: Valinor/Middle Earth communications in the Fourth Age.
Categories: Book-verse, Movie-verse Characters: Aragorn, Celeborn, Frodo, Galadriel, Sam
Genres: Essay
Warnings: None
Series: Arda Musings
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 507 Read Count: 2508
Published: Oct 02 2008 Updated: Oct 02 2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Letters from the Undying Lands Reviewer: Narya Signed
I never thought of that aspect of Middle Earth ship building before - in fact I never really thought about ship building at all, to be honest - but now that you've pointed it out, I agree that it does make sense. A logical explanation for one of the Professor's loose ends that opens up some great plot opportunities.

It bugs me when purists start harping on about violations of canon. This is fan fiction, for crying out loud, people! We are free to do what we will with our versions of Middle Earth. My philosophy is just don't read it if you don't like it; it seems unfair to leave a review just to tell an author that they haven't followed canon to the letter.

End of rant.

Author's Response: Most of my stories take place in the Fourth Age, so I think I'm justified in introducing technical innovations which I believe are within the abilities of Gondorian engineers. I think it likely that Tolkien would have done the same if he wrote later sequels to "Lord of the Rings".

I confess that I've occasionally pointed out minor canon violations to new authors, but I've also advised them, if they haven't already done so, to give their story an AU warning if they wish to change Middle Earth history. I'm certainly not a purist and never tell anyone in my reviews that they can't write a story exactly the way they want it to be.
Date: Jan 16 2009
Let Us Be Friends by sylc Rated: G [Reviews - 6]
Summary: Lindir is the only elfling in Imladris and is lonely. However, when Glorfindel tries to befriend him, Lindir refuses on account of Glorfindel's great age.
Categories: Book-verse, Movie-verse Characters: Glorfindel, Lindir
Genres: General, Humor
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 788 Read Count: 1356
Published: Nov 01 2008 Updated: Nov 01 2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Let Us Be Friends Reviewer: Narya Signed
Aww! I enjoyed this a lot, especially the way you've given each character a distinctive voice. Well done :)

Author's Response: Thanks Narya! I'm happy you enjoyed it.
Date: Nov 02 2008
Summary: An essay of how this site has affected my life. Response to challenge from Karlmir Stonewain
Categories: Off Topic Characters: None
Genres: Essay
Warnings: None
Challenges: My Portal to Middle Earth
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 427 Read Count: 1852
Published: Nov 17 2008 Updated: Nov 17 2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: My Middle Earth Portal Reviewer: Narya Signed
I also found this site through google, I was totally bored one afternoon in Freshers' Week, and hey presto...a new obsession was born. I agree with your comments about how supportive other authors are too - they've really encouraged me.

One thing - I think you mean "spurred," not "spurned" - "spurned" means "rejected" as in "I spurned his love."

Take care! :)

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Oops hehe yeah thanks :D i'll change that.
Date: Nov 17 2008
Alter-Egos by owlett Rated: PG-13 [Reviews - 25]
Summary: What if all the main characters were women? Response to callerofcrows challenge.
Categories: Movie-verse, Off Topic Characters: Aragorn, Boromir, Elrond, Frodo, Gimli, Glóin, Legolas, Merry, Other Canon Character, Pippin, Sam, Sauron, The Fellowship
Genres: Humor
Warnings: AU (alternate universe), Violence
Challenges: Alter-egos
Series: My Crossovers
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1535 Read Count: 6437
Published: Nov 18 2008 Updated: Nov 23 2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Froda and the Ring Reviewer: Narya Signed
Haha, some nice touches in here...I especially liked the Ladyship of the Ring, Lass's bow, and Saruwoman. Good work, Owlett; keep it up, this is fun!
Date: Nov 26 2008
Summary: Young Sam Gamgee is playing with the Cotton children. Set between 'The Hobbit' and 'The Lord of the RIngs'.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Sam
Genres: General
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 399 Read Count: 1553
Published: Nov 22 2008 Updated: Nov 22 2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Narya Signed
Aw :) this put a smile on my face. I especially liked young Rosie, though Sam was cute too.
Date: Feb 14 2009
Summary: On a late summer night, young Estel offers words of comfort to a grieving Legolas. Non-slash oneshot/drabble.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Legolas
Genres: Angst
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 615 Read Count: 3047
Published: Nov 24 2008 Updated: Nov 24 2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: A Child's Wisdom Reviewer: Narya Signed
Aww. That was lovely. You captured Estel's voice really well; I love reading fics with Legolas and young Estel, and this one was particularly cute.
Date: Nov 24 2008
Summary: Gilraen reflects on how Estel his like his father.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Aragorn, Gilraen
Genres: Other
Warnings: None
Series: Christmas Themes
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 410 Read Count: 2286
Published: Dec 02 2008 Updated: Dec 02 2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Just Like You Reviewer: Narya Signed
Absolutely gorgeous. This is such a touching story; I love young Estel! Sweet without being mawkish or sentimental, and you've structured it very well. Thanks for this.

Author's Response: You're welcome. A lot of people don't show the way Gilraen would have felt. I will probably explore that a little more in the future.
Date: Jan 23 2009
Summary: Extremely dramatic and slight AU. Legolas, Gimli, Frodo and Sam are now in the Undying Lands and they are each dealing with their own problems. This story also gives Merry's and Pippin's views from back in the Shire as they learn to deal with new difficulties and their feelings. As Sam learns to grieve, Frodo copes with his illness, Legolas has bad dreams and Gimli is asked for advice, they are all put through trauma in an unexpected conclusion.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Frodo, Gandalf / Olorin, Gimli, Legolas, Merry, Pippin, Sam
Genres: Angst, Mystery
Warnings: AU (alternate universe), Violence
Series: Cute Merry-Pippin stories!
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 17260 Read Count: 13461
Published: Dec 20 2008 Updated: Feb 09 2009 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Arrival Reviewer: Narya Signed
I'm really enjoying this so far - I really like your writing style and I think you capture your characters perfectly. The only thing I would criticise is your summary; I think you're seriously underselling a well-written story by putting that it's "not as dramatic as it sounds"!!

Keep up the good work.

Author's Response: Ok then, thanks for the critisism! Looking back, it is really dramatic! I'm glad you've reviewed and that you think it's well-written! The new chapter is up as soon as I've applied the finishing touches! Thanks again, meerkatalex
Date: Jan 14 2009
Kissing Rain by Anwyn Rated: PG-13 [Reviews - 8]
Summary: If you truly love something, you must also be prepared to let it go.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Elphir
Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: AU (alternate universe)
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2815 Read Count: 2010
Published: Dec 30 2008 Updated: Dec 30 2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Narya Signed
I read this without having read "Child of Storms," but even so I still loved it! It was structured perfectly, and your descriptions are absolutely gorgeous. The subject matter is something we can all identify with, too - those moments that we forever look back on and think "what if...?"

I guess in your AU these two end up together? Actually, no, don't tell me. I'll read it and find out :)

Take care,
Narya

Author's Response: First I must applogize for not responding to this sooner, usually I am quicker as I feel if someone is kind enough to leave a review for something I have written a response is the very least I can do! I don't get an e-mail or anything telling me when I have a new review so I didn't even realize before now, so I applogize. Thank you so much, It pleases me to no end to know that you enjoyed this and it was strongly inspired by the song that it is named after which I think it so vivid in it lyrics that it drew such a strong 'What if?" situation in my mind that I could not help but read it. It also seemed to suit the characters in my mind. Oh yes I have had countless moments that I have looked back upon and wondered "What if?" What if I had acted differently, what if I had gone instead of staying and vice versa and that is what part of this story is. I do love drappling in the "What if?" aspect of my stories at times becuase one event can potentially have so many intresting outcomes. It is also funny, writing an AU of an AU! Alright, I shall not ruin the story for then and you can find out what happens for yourself! Thank you so much for your lovely review, It means alot! All the best, Anwyn.

Author's Response: First I must applogize for not responding to this sooner, usually I am quicker as I feel if someone is kind enough to leave a review for something I have written a response is the very least I can do! I don't get an e-mail or anything telling me when I have a new review so I didn't even realize before now, so I applogize. Thank you so much, It pleases me to no end to know that you enjoyed this and it was strongly inspired by the song that it is named after which I think it so vivid in it lyrics that it drew such a strong 'What if?" situation in my mind that I could not help but read it. It also seemed to suit the characters in my mind. Oh yes I have had countless moments that I have looked back upon and wondered "What if?" What if I had acted differently, what if I had gone instead of staying and vice versa and that is what part of this story is. I do love drappling in the "What if?" aspect of my stories at times becuase one event can potentially have so many intresting outcomes. It is also funny, writing an AU of an AU! Alright, I shall not ruin the story for then and you can find out what happens for yourself! Thank you so much for your lovely review, It means alot! All the best, Anwyn.
Date: Feb 21 2009
Summary: I think the title explains it all.
Categories: Off Topic Characters: Aragorn, Arwen, Asfaloth, Bilbo, Boromir, Celeborn, Celebrķan, Eldarion, Elladan, Elrohir, Elrond, Galadriel, Haldir, Merry, Nazgūl, Other Canon Character, Sam, Saruman, Sauron, The Fellowship, Witch King
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, Fantasy, General, Humor, Mystery, Other, Parody, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 13470 Read Count: 47176
Published: Jan 09 2009 Updated: Jun 21 2010 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Entry 1 (Ada says to put the date but I don't feel like it now.) Reviewer: Narya Signed
Oh, that was so funny! :D nice to see an update to this - I'll send you a more detailed message later on, but for now suffice to say that this entry put a huge grin on my face!

Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: Mar 22 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Entry 1 (Ada says to put the date but I don't feel like it now.) Reviewer: Narya Signed
Totally agree with ladygreensleeves about Johnny Cash ^-^ ahem, this is another lovely chapter...I have an idea what's coming up next, but I won't spoil it for everyone else! I'm just fiddling with the next chapter of Trapped (planning to post that later this evening) and once that's done and up I'll send you an email and we can have a proper discussion!

Very romantic wedding scene, though. Nice job :-)

Author's Response:

Yes, Johnny Cash played a little bit of a role in helping me find the title of WTL, haha :). Thanks for th praise. I'm pretty sure you do know what's going to happen next, but if you're thinking what I'm thinking, then there are a few events between that and the current entry that need to happen first. Looking forward to your email!

Date: Apr 21 2009