Ok, this is probably because I just got back from Youtheatre, and several of the older boys are a bit...interesting with their comments, but I could HEAR Jack saying, "Oh while he was spanking me when we were in bed." after the line, "Did he why did he call you naughty."
¬_¬ I've just realised I read the line wrong. i thought it said "when" not "why" which makes this review completely irrevelant, but as I put the effort into writing it, i am sending it regrdless ^_^
Author's Response: I went back and reread the section with your line --> ROTFL! That's great! Thanks for sharing! xD
This story was so sweet! I love your writing style and I especially love the way you write Lindir and his discussions with his uncle. Please write more stories like this one! I'll be adding this to my favorites. ~God bless
Author's Response: *beams* Thank you so much. I'm delighted you're enjoying them so much. As for writing more of them, I fully intend on doing so. :) *hugs*