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Reviewer: Freya Byron Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/01/08 - 10:21 pm Title: The Council. (In which we meet a further TWO Mary-Sues)

Ha ha, this is hilarious!
Score for Boromir!
*Anti-Boromir protestants wave signs saying things like, "Down with Bashers, Up with Boromir!"*
We need another chapter!

Reviewer: Freya Byron Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/01/08 - 10:15 pm Title: The Council. (In which we meet a further TWO Mary-Sues)

Ha ha, this is hilarious!
Score for Boromir!
*Anti-Boromir protestants wave signs saying things like, "Down with Bashers, Up with Boromir!"*
We need another chapter!

Reviewer: GreenWoodElleth Signed [Report This]
Date: 17/09/07 - 10:59 am Title: Oh dear, it's bad from the start...

Wow, you've got to update this!! I love it and I miss Kalir!

Reviewer: Zoso22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30/06/07 - 11:50 am Title: The Council. (In which we meet a further TWO Mary-Sues)

I love this story! Those terrible horrible awful *inserts long string of adjectives* Mary Sues! *shakes fist wrathfully*

Author's Response: Heh heh.

Reviewer: Blue eyed Heretic Signed [Report This]
Date: 24/04/07 - 01:20 am Title: The Council. (In which we meet a further TWO Mary-Sues)

YOU ARE A FREAKIN GENIOUS!!!!
I HATE Boromir bashing and what the hell is up with the hobbit girl?!
Btw, giving Elrond the swivel chair kept me in stitches for a few minutes... specially the end part. He he...
Update soon!!!

Author's Response: Genius, or just twisted? You decided ;)

Reviewer: Gemini_Elf Signed [Report This]
Date: 20/02/07 - 10:28 pm Title: The Council. (In which we meet a further TWO Mary-Sues)

Ps. I meant Male not meal. Sorry about that

Author's Response: Where?

Reviewer: Gemini_Elf Signed [Report This]
Date: 20/02/07 - 10:27 pm Title: The Council. (In which we meet a further TWO Mary-Sues)

Ok... Note: Kill Shadow Ranger. It IS funny. I'll give you that. BUT DON'T KILL FRODO! Kill the MS's! Kill Boromir (Oh please! Oh please!) BUT LEAVE FRODO AND LEGOLAS ALONE ¬_¬ Or otherwise everyone will know what Boromir sleeps with (Not tht sorta sleeps with you disgusting meal)

Author's Response: What the heck...

Reviewer: iggybaby Signed [Report This]
Date: 19/02/07 - 09:21 pm Title: The Council. (In which we meet a further TWO Mary-Sues)

*bangs head on keyboard* what horror! Stupid mary sues! kill them off i say, kill them all! muahahahaha.....
iggybaby

Author's Response: I will continue when i can

Reviewer: GreenWoodElleth Signed [Report This]
Date: 19/02/07 - 02:38 pm Title: The Council. (In which we meet a further TWO Mary-Sues)

*Falls on her butt, laughing her head off* LOL sux for the fellowship...I almosty feel bad for Legolas...almost. But I have more important things to save...Like Haldirs sanity*Goops pitch in Lladri's hair* HE"S MINE!!

Author's Response: Legolas will probably be put out of his misery

Reviewer: BookLuva7 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19/02/07 - 10:53 am Title: The Council. (In which we meet a further TWO Mary-Sues)

*doubles over with laughter* /“Otherwise two glasses of vintage wine will take over the world!” he paused dramatically, then frowned. “That didn’t sound right… pickled eggs will triumph… omelette as we know it will be destroyed./ Brilliant S.R! You give me competition in the humor business!!! Great job! Looking forward to more! :D :D :D

Author's Response: That was my favourite line

Reviewer: jules14 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19/02/07 - 03:05 am Title: Oh dear, it's bad from the start...

I'm sorry, I found out I can't MST this fic, with one major reason: it's actually GOOD. So besides when the characters agreed with your comments, their riffs were just plain boring.

You'll have to make this story a lot worse...add some terrible grammar and a LOT of canon-raping and sappy romance for it to be MSTed.

Author's Response: I'll do the even worse version later

Reviewer: GreenWoodElleth Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/02/07 - 10:54 pm Title: Rivendell suffers, (the sane of them anyway)

NO!!!! NOT MY ELF!!! *Drags Haldir away from Sue, screaming at Lladri* DEMON SUE!!! Great chapter!

Author's Response: He might convert, not sure yet

Reviewer: GreenWoodElleth Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/02/07 - 10:48 pm Title: To Rivendell! (I feel sorry for them)

Aww...*hands Kalir a chocolate chip cookie*He puts up with so much.

Author's Response: *Kalir eats cookie*

Reviewer: GreenWoodElleth Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/02/07 - 10:45 pm Title: *Whimper* It doesn't get any better...

*Laughs her head off* Oh man, so funny!! Poor Kalir

Author's Response: Empathy at its best

Reviewer: iggybaby Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/02/07 - 12:10 am Title: Rivendell suffers, (the sane of them anyway)

where did haldir and faramir come from? i love you! oops, i mean about the jack thing. sorry if i scared you.
iggybaby

Author's Response: Exactly the point, MS stories often have random things like this that ever remain unexplained

Reviewer: BookLuva7 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/02/07 - 11:22 pm Title: Rivendell suffers, (the sane of them anyway)

*stabs Lladri in the gut, Lladri dies, and is brought back to life again. Process is repeated many times until BL7 hears a cough* Oh! Wonderful chappie! Grr *skewers Lladri with a kebab stick* Really great! Curse you evil Mary Sue!!! Plz update soon! :D

Author's Response: She'll get what she deserves eventually.

Reviewer: Gemini_Elf Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/02/07 - 07:54 pm Title: To Rivendell! (I feel sorry for them)

Speedy. Let me explain this in a wayn your small deluded mind will understand. ORCS ARE EVIL! THEY ARE NOT AFTER TEA AND BISCUITS!!

Author's Response: Prove it

Reviewer: iggybaby Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/02/07 - 08:25 pm Title: To Rivendell! (I feel sorry for them)

Your first paragraph was so jack sparrow style! I totally understood it! Stupid mary sue! go die in a dark hole!
iggybaby

Author's Response: I'm surprisingly good at Jack Sparrow

Reviewer: BookLuva7 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/02/07 - 08:25 pm Title: Oh dear, it's bad from the start...

*sighs* Then I'll guess I'll post it ... Wait, was that email a PowerPoint, called something like 'The Hardest things to say to Someone'?? If so, I sent it to you too, as well as GWE, but if you didn't get it and GWE got it, that means something is wrong when I send emails to you, because I got that test email I sent to you a while ago. Strange ... anyway *goes off to post the chapter* :D

Author's Response: It was something like that, however it appeared in email format and I think I deleted it. However, it was possible forwarded to me by GWelleth

Reviewer: BookLuva7 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/02/07 - 08:07 pm Title: To Rivendell! (I feel sorry for them)

*sniggers* That was hilarious!! *does a dance* Go Kalir, go Kalir, go, go, go Kalir!! Anyway, plz update soon!!
BTW, did you get the next chappie in Divine Intervention?? If not, I'll post it ... *looks up at sky with tragic expression* Why??? Why did email need to stuff up?? Why?? XP :D

Author's Response: No I didn't, but that's damn weird, because GreenWoodElleth *waves to her* sent me a couple of emails a while ago, including a really random one with loads of people I've never heard of in... I think you'd sent one of the replies...

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