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Reviewer: Ria Signed [Report This]
Date: 15/05/07 - 02:32 am Title: Chapter 3

Ooh, who is he? I like the suspense!

typos: "lay him"; the commas in "understand, why" and "confused, who" and "frightened, how"; missing comma: "your voice, Luthien,"; "love and longing flow out"; "he move"; "corradors"

Author's Response: Thanks, I will try harder!

Reviewer: Ria Signed [Report This]
Date: 15/05/07 - 02:28 am Title: Chapter 2

This is a great start. The typos I see in this section are "Ihad", "prepard" "stay out notice" and "who I saw". You have my deep grammatical admiration for using lay correctly *fawning*.

Author's Response: Thanks for the info! *Don't ever use school computers to check spelling!*

Reviewer: Sharpe_and_Harper Signed [Report This]
Date: 23/02/07 - 11:05 pm Title: Chapter 3

This was so beautiful. Even though the chapters are short, they mean so much. I'm sorry that I haven't reviewed this in a while...I actually didn't know that this was up. Anyway, I hope that you will add more soon! ~God bless

Author's Response: Sorry I haven't been on. I heve had an - interesting experience.

Reviewer: Sharpe_and_Harper Signed [Report This]
Date: 26/01/07 - 12:30 am Title: Chapter 2

Yay you posted more! *does a little dance* I really love this story; and I also really love your writing style. Wonderful work...please add more soon! ~God bless

Author's Response: Thanks, I am trying to write one chapter a day!

Reviewer: GreenWoodElleth Signed [Report This]
Date: 24/01/07 - 09:54 pm Title: Chapter 1

Good start! More soon?

Author's Response: I am trying to write a chapter a day. Though I think I chose a bad day to start! Yesterday I was at the hospital, and unable to get to the computer!

Reviewer: Sharpe_and_Harper Signed [Report This]
Date: 23/01/07 - 03:45 am Title: Chapter 1

Oh! I really like this! Please continue; I'm adding this to my favorites! ~God bless

Author's Response: Thanks! I am honored to be added to someones favorites!

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