Reviews For A Dream Discarded
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Reviewer: Charli800 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21/11/08 - 06:19 am Title: A Field of Death

Is the last line part of the fic? The style changes very abruptly!

This is an interesting idea and on the whole you've played it out well. The one fault I will mention is that I found the logic tricky to follow at the beginning.

An intriguing look at war from a very different perspective.

Charli

Reviewer: Merry Signed [Report This]
Date: 23/01/07 - 12:39 am Title: A Field of Death

I like that!!!!!!

Reviewer: Beregond5 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22/01/07 - 11:08 pm Title: A Field of Death

Quite good. You made me want to read the book again. :)

Reviewer: KestralSurion Signed [Report This]
Date: 22/01/07 - 06:48 pm Title: A Field of Death

Excellent emotion and detail.

Author's Response: Thank you! I was actually feeling somwhat tired and wistfull when I wrote it. ^-^

Reviewer: iggybaby Signed [Report This]
Date: 22/01/07 - 04:01 pm Title: A Field of Death

he never knew. may he lie and rest in the peace of his forefathers and son.
iggybaby

Author's Response: I'm sure he'd appreciate that. -Nodnod-

Reviewer: elfenears Signed [Report This]
Date: 22/01/07 - 09:04 am Title: A Field of Death

this was really good *claps*

Author's Response: Hee! Thank you very much.

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