Did you know that the origional meaning of lunatic was bewitched by the moon? I thought I'd share that little tidbit with you. Great stuff! I really like reading your stories, etc. I'm working on In Flux now so, you'll be hearing more from me . . . :))
Wow, you've done it again. Absolutely beautiful! I don't honw how you come up with these, but they are stunning.
Now for a couple of grammatical corrections, because I am a beta-raeder and I can't help myself sometimes. =) I think you should replace the exclamation marks with full stops, as the wording of the lines is dramatic enough not to need the extra emphasis. It would flow better without them. Secondly, 'dieing' needs to be 'dying'.
There. Now that I'm done nitpicking, I will say again that I adore this piece and I hope you'll write more of these things!
Author's Response: oops, thanx!! *sheepish grin* I'll fix it right away. =)