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Reviewer: Shadow Maiden Signed [Report This]
Date: 26/11/08 - 01:52 pm Title: Chapter 1

Did you know that the origional meaning of lunatic was bewitched by the moon? I thought I'd share that little tidbit with you. Great stuff! I really like reading your stories, etc. I'm working on In Flux now so, you'll be hearing more from me . . . :))

Reviewer: Gemini_Elf Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/01/07 - 06:27 pm Title: Chapter 1

Wow

Author's Response: thanx =)

Reviewer: ArwenUndomiel Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/01/07 - 07:59 am Title: Chapter 1

Wow, you've done it again. Absolutely beautiful! I don't honw how you come up with these, but they are stunning.

Now for a couple of grammatical corrections, because I am a beta-raeder and I can't help myself sometimes. =) I think you should replace the exclamation marks with full stops, as the wording of the lines is dramatic enough not to need the extra emphasis. It would flow better without them. Secondly, 'dieing' needs to be 'dying'.

There. Now that I'm done nitpicking, I will say again that I adore this piece and I hope you'll write more of these things!

Author's Response: oops, thanx!! *sheepish grin* I'll fix it right away. =)

Reviewer: Sharpe_and_Harper Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/01/07 - 04:57 am Title: Chapter 1

Oh wow! I really loved this! It was so beautifully written! Wonderful work...this is definitely going on my favorites! ~God bless

Author's Response: thanx!

Reviewer: iggybaby Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/01/07 - 01:39 am Title: Chapter 1

I love it! You rhyme beautifully! i can't rhyme to save my life.
iggybaby

Author's Response: thanx*blushing* I still like yours best, though! =

Reviewer: BookLuva7 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/01/07 - 01:39 am Title: Chapter 1

*smiles* Short, but sweet ... I like it! :D

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