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Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Brassen Signed
LOL! Very cool.

Author's Response: glad you like it! =D
Date: Jan 10 2007 03:48 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: ArwenUndomiel Signed
Ooh, very funny!! It's really good. Now for the inevitable concrit, because for some reason I'm just itching to criticize today (as you'll have noticed if you read my other review, lol).

Firstly, Gollum, not Golem. Secondly, the actions (which you've put in brackets) should go after the colon, not before. Thirdly, 'In descript ranger' didn't quite make sense. Maybe if you put something like 'I'm just a ranger!'. Just some thoughts.

Really sorry about being so critical! You know I love it really...just like I love all of your work. I can't wait for the rest of this!

Author's Response: Ooops...that what happens when you go without coffee I guess. Thanks for the review, I'll change asap! =)
Date: Jan 10 2007 03:04 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Sharpe_and_Harper Signed
lololol. I loved this! The way you wrote it was just so amusing! Please add more soon! ~God bless

Author's Response: thanks=)
Date: Jan 10 2007 12:00 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: BookLuva7 Signed
*adds to Favorites* Hilarious!!! Write more soon! :D

Author's Response: Thanx!! I will! =D
Date: Jan 09 2007 08:32 pm [Report This]
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