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Reviewer: Wyn Telemnar Signed [Report This]
Date: 15/12/08 - 02:25 am Title: VII. The Find
Date: 15/12/08 - 02:25 am Title: VII. The Find
I'm intreeged. More soon?
Author's Response: This Spring at the latest.
Reviewer: Beregond5 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/03/07 - 07:49 pm Title: VII. The Find
Date: 11/03/07 - 07:49 pm Title: VII. The Find
Still going strong. And the plot is becoming more and more interesting! :)
Author's Response: Thanks -- I've been slow recently, but I will continue to update.
Reviewer: gythia Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/03/07 - 03:53 am Title: VII. The Find
Date: 07/03/07 - 03:53 am Title: VII. The Find
great story! I eagerly await the next installment!
Author's Response: Thanks. I'll try to get it done this week.
Reviewer: Beregond5 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16/02/07 - 10:54 am Title: VI. Hidden Treasures
Date: 16/02/07 - 10:54 am Title: VI. Hidden Treasures
Another excellent chapter, and the last line was top notch! :D
There's just one sentence that needs a bit of fixing:
“A lost hoard of the Dunedain I could believe to be at Fornost, but a Seening Stone — ! I am ready to look for this thing with you, but I the lore of your own folk teaches that the last Seeing Stones of the North Kingdom were lost with Arvedui Last-king.”
Keep updating! :)
Author's Response: Whoops! Nice catch: I'm amazed at how many times I can check my own writing without seeing (NOT SEENING) typos.
Reviewer: faramiriel Signed [Report This]
Date: 16/02/07 - 12:39 am Title: VI. Hidden Treasures
Date: 16/02/07 - 12:39 am Title: VI. Hidden Treasures
heehee
Author's Response: Glad you liked it!
Reviewer: GreenWoodElleth Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/02/07 - 10:32 pm Title: VI. Hidden Treasures
Date: 12/02/07 - 10:32 pm Title: VI. Hidden Treasures
*Snicker snicker* Nothing like some good fish as comfort food am I right? Great chapter!
Author's Response: You are right -- and when I'm in the mood for sushi, my inner Gollum comes out. Fishes!
Reviewer: Beregond5 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/02/07 - 12:50 pm Title: V. Hazards of the Highway
Date: 08/02/07 - 12:50 pm Title: V. Hazards of the Highway
Lol! Good explanation on how the sign of the Prancing Pony came to be, and I absolutely loved the beginning where she was dreaming of the young hobbit. :D
Author's Response: I'm glad to hear it.
Reviewer: faramiriel Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/02/07 - 09:54 pm Title: V. Hazards of the Highway
Date: 04/02/07 - 09:54 pm Title: V. Hazards of the Highway
I am loving this so much!! Update soon!!!
Author's Response: Thanks for the encouragement. I really appreciate your reading it.
Reviewer: Armariel Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/02/07 - 07:21 pm Title: V. Hazards of the Highway
Date: 04/02/07 - 07:21 pm Title: V. Hazards of the Highway
Oh this is a fun story...Xenobia is quite a pistol. I look forward to the next part!
Author's Response: Thanks. I trust you'll warn me if she wanders off into M-S territory.
Reviewer: Beregond5 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/02/07 - 12:02 am Title: IV. Dark Doings
Date: 04/02/07 - 12:02 am Title: IV. Dark Doings
This chapter was great. And this is the first time we see Xenobia naughty! :D I hope she didn't hurt herself too much because of the fall - or that Bombadill caught her or something.
And now for something completely different: Aww... you're welcome! *blushes*
Author's Response: No, really -- good reading is a very valuable resource.
Reviewer: faramiriel Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/02/07 - 08:01 pm Title: IV. Dark Doings
Date: 01/02/07 - 08:01 pm Title: IV. Dark Doings
I love this please update soon!!! Please?!
Author's Response: Thank you, faramiriel. I'll have a new chapter up this weekend.
Reviewer: GreenWoodElleth Signed [Report This]
Date: 29/01/07 - 01:58 pm Title: IV. Dark Doings
Date: 29/01/07 - 01:58 pm Title: IV. Dark Doings
oops...*laughs evilly* the mayhem begins! I love your style of writing and its an excellent start to a excellent fic!! I love Xenobia!
Author's Response: Thanks! Again, if there's any particular mayhem you'd like to see, I'm open to suggestions.
Reviewer: Beregond5 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27/01/07 - 05:21 pm Title: III. On the Road to Ruins
Date: 27/01/07 - 05:21 pm Title: III. On the Road to Ruins
This is getting better and better. I enjoy the pace that you have in this, and the appearance of Tom Bombadill was priceless. :)
Just something to put to your attention:
“That is, if you are willing to let me tell you them.” I think it should be "of them".
Keep updating! :)
Author's Response: Good point, Beregond. That scans much better -- thanks for the note.
Reviewer: Beregond5 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16/01/07 - 09:39 pm Title: II. A Nose for Trouble
Date: 16/01/07 - 09:39 pm Title: II. A Nose for Trouble
Wow. Your writing is brilliant. The introduction was very Tolkienesque and Xenobia Took is a very complete character. One doesn't often get to see that in original characters, so that was something very welcome while reading this. I hope you'll update soon. :)
Author's Response: Wow back -- I'm very flattered. I should be back at it in the next week or so.
Reviewer: GreenWoodElleth Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/01/07 - 08:36 pm Title: II. A Nose for Trouble
Date: 09/01/07 - 08:36 pm Title: II. A Nose for Trouble
Oh, cool!! I like her already!!
Author's Response: Well, I'm glad. What particular naughtiness would you like to see her engage in?
RS