Another excellent chapter, and the last line was top notch! :D
There's just one sentence that needs a bit of fixing:
â€śA lost hoard of the Dunedain I could believe to be at Fornost, but a Seening Stone â€” ! I am ready to look for this thing with you, but I the lore of your own folk teaches that the last Seeing Stones of the North Kingdom were lost with Arvedui Last-king.â€ť
Keep updating! :)
Author's Response: Whoops! Nice catch: I'm amazed at how many times I can check my own writing without seeing (NOT SEENING) typos.
This chapter was great. And this is the first time we see Xenobia naughty! :D I hope she didn't hurt herself too much because of the fall - or that Bombadill caught her or something.
And now for something completely different: Aww... you're welcome! *blushes*
Author's Response: No, really -- good reading is a very valuable resource.
oops...*laughs evilly* the mayhem begins! I love your style of writing and its an excellent start to a excellent fic!! I love Xenobia!
Author's Response: Thanks! Again, if there's any particular mayhem you'd like to see, I'm open to suggestions.
This is getting better and better. I enjoy the pace that you have in this, and the appearance of Tom Bombadill was priceless. :)
Just something to put to your attention:
â€śThat is, if you are willing to let me tell you them.â€ť I think it should be "of them".
Keep updating! :)
Author's Response: Good point, Beregond. That scans much better -- thanks for the note.
Wow. Your writing is brilliant. The introduction was very Tolkienesque and Xenobia Took is a very complete character. One doesn't often get to see that in original characters, so that was something very welcome while reading this. I hope you'll update soon. :)
Author's Response: Wow back -- I'm very flattered. I should be back at it in the next week or so.