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I am much looking forward to future chapters. I believe you have built the story line and the characters well, and for this I commend you. Just one question though: at the moment is Calenuir a Thestral foal, or a full grown one?
Poor Harry got shot by an orc arrow, and now he does not even remember his own name...how sad and tragic!
Author's Response: Thank you again for your comments, I am not sure if I am reading it right but it was not the arrow that did it. Still I look forward to further comments if you have the time.
A really great first chapter! Poor Harry, I wonder what hit his arm? I have to read the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you for taking the time to let me know what you thought, I am pleased that you enjoyed it.
wow! i sooo can't wait for an update!
Author's Response: Thank you for taking the time to let me know what you thought, I am glad that you enjoyed it and just for that I have updated the next chapter for you. I hadn't realised that I was behind in updating this story on this site, so will rectify that asap.