This is beautiful! The imagery you've used is wonderful, and so vivid! This has a nice rythm to it as well.
Oh, while I'm here, so sorry about the delay in returning your chapter! I've had the flu...I'm a bit better now though so I'll send it to you as soon as I can!
But yeah, this was just beautiful. You should write more songs, you're really good at it!
Author's Response: Oh thats alright I actually have a cold myself(or should I say cobe)Thanx! I actually came up with this while riding my horse down a really pretty dirt road near my house. Thanx so much for the supportive review XOXO
Hmmm ... BookLuva7 likes!!! :D You should write more like this!! *nudge nudge, hint hint* :D
Author's Response: Thanx!! I've been so preoccupied and this one sort of came to me...Thanx both u guyz for such supportive reviews ( I would hug you but I'll gib you my cobe) =)