I really like the rhythm of this poem!
Author's Response: Cool! I was going to call it "Drip,Drip" but i found that was too childish. Actually, now that i think about it, Drip, drip sounds like blood dripping. iggybaby
It reminds me of a poem I wrote once, though this one is a hundred times better! Well done, it's very, poignant
Author's Response: Great minds think alike! I like the word "Poignant". it sounds very smart. iggybaby