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Reviewer: Shadow Ranger Signed [Report This]
Date: 14/12/06 - 04:41 pm Title: breaching is such a strong word...

wow, thanks for writing so well, it is great entertainment, and I honestly can't wait for the next part

Author's Response: Im glad you like it! I really am! I promise to update soon! =)

Reviewer: ArwenUndomiel Signed [Report This]
Date: 14/12/06 - 01:17 am Title: breaching is such a strong word...

Heehee, what an interesting way to meet! Love the originality. This was very funny, I was giggling the whole time! Poor Elves, they must be so confused.

I am very glad you've observed the language barrier. Most people writing these sorts of stories ignore the fact that English isn't spoken in Middle-Earth, so it's a rare thing to find a story where the newcomers can't speak the language. It makes the story just that much better! Plus it leaves lots of opportunities for humour.

This story just keeps getting better! Please update really soon, I can't wait to read the next chapter!

Author's Response: Yeah, ask a newbie what the common speech is and they'll tell you english. Isn't it westron? See, even I'm a little green as far as language goes. *sheepish grin* Thanx for the review, your always so supportive! Thank you :)

Reviewer: ArwenUndomiel Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/12/06 - 11:43 pm Title: Warg? Where?

Ooh, sorry I didn't review sooner! This chapter was fantastic. You just love leaving cliffies, don't you? This is a fairly common plotline, but yours is one of the first takes on it I've been able to enjoy. This is a fantastic story! Will you update soon if I whine and beg enough? How bout my puppy-dog eyes, they usually work...

Author's Response: Thanx!! Yeah it is a common plot line, but I got the idea and just couldn't let it go! Yes I love cliffies :) it builds suspense! thanx for the review!

Reviewer: Shadow Ranger Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/12/06 - 09:26 pm Title: Warg? Where?

What a great line!
heaven was a crazy place...
Keep writing

Author's Response: thanx! I'll review soon!

Reviewer: Shadow Ranger Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/12/06 - 03:51 pm Title: Chapter 2

Very interesting, slightly confusing, rather funny, that is my review, but anyway...
Please update, preferably sooner rather than later

Author's Response: Hey, thankyou for your re_iew! Yeah this one was a little confusing I sort of made it up on a whim. I'll update soon, I promise!! Its been so hard to balance school work and writing lately so I apologize for any delays!! :)

Reviewer: Shadow Ranger Signed [Report This]
Date: 30/11/06 - 08:06 pm Title: A Normal Day

Well, I enjoyed that writing, it's a good story, keep it up when you can and i'll keep reading.

Author's Response: Thanx!! I'm halfway through the second chapter, so I'll post it soon. I really appreciate the review!

Reviewer: ArwenUndomiel Signed [Report This]
Date: 30/11/06 - 07:18 am Title: A Normal Day

Wow, this is fantastic! Hun, I am really impressed...but I won't stand for cliffies like this! Please, you have to update soon. Your characterization is great, your descritions are beautifully vivid...but you can't leave us hanging like that! Write more soon!

Author's Response: Wow, Thanx!! I was wondering what people would think of this one. The idea came to me in the middle of math class, I mean what is math for anyway? Thanxe again, I'm really glad you like it!! :)

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