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Reviewer: Vanya Vasa Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/12/06 - 09:41 pm Title: Chapter 5

Sorry... I thought Tyler was a girl.. I know better now. I like the way you are building the characters without concerning yourself about the frills....

Author's Response: Thanks. I'm kinda trying to have each chapter from one of the cousin's point of views. next chapter will be up soon.

Reviewer: Vanya Vasa Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/12/06 - 09:30 pm Title: 3

Ok you clarified the characters. No you're not moving too fast, things are picking up quite nicely... Onto the next chapter...

Reviewer: Vanya Vasa Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/12/06 - 09:20 pm Title: 2

Here's the review you asked for. This is a good story but you need to clarify the characters and thier relationships more, Who is tyler? What is she like?

Reviewer: Vanya Vasa Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/12/06 - 09:09 pm Title: 1

Its an interesting beginning on a story... as long as you keep up the quality I won't mind reviewing it for you...

Reviewer: Gemini_Elf Signed [Report This]
Date: 27/11/06 - 01:44 pm Title: 1

What happened to your other fic? This is good! Write more!

Author's Response: I'm putting up another one as well actually. an ElladanOC..hehe. Horizon needs some revision before it's gonna be up again.

Reviewer: The Dragon Signed [Report This]
Date: 26/11/06 - 03:41 pm Title: 3

Lucky, lucky Dragon! I found this story today and already I have an update (please write more soon - I want to know what happens!)

Reviewer: Ranger Signed [Report This]
Date: 26/11/06 - 01:51 pm Title: 2

Yay... since you are eternally grateful... hmm... clean my room! bwah ha ha...

Just kidding. :) Nice chapter, I'm glad Aragorn, Legolas, and Gandalf are here... can't wait 'til you update!

Author's Response: I'll update today probably. thanks for the review

Reviewer: The Dragon Signed [Report This]
Date: 26/11/06 - 01:49 pm Title: 2

Hmm - be interesting to see how this one pans out! I hope Jasmine starts to interact with her family again soon - otherwise she is going to end up very lonely!

Author's Response: you never know thanks for the review. next chapter will be up very shortly.

Reviewer: KimberlyJane Signed [Report This]
Date: 25/11/06 - 09:32 pm Title: 1

Ah! I like it I like it I like it!
Keep it up!

Reviewer: Ranger Signed [Report This]
Date: 25/11/06 - 09:17 pm Title: 1

Ooh...it would be cool if it was someone for the fellowship. But from the summary I wouldn't guess so... Can't wait, please update soon!

Author's Response: I'm already working out ideas for the chapters. thanks for the review. and about the fellowship thing...well..you'll have to wait and see.

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