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Title: Chapter 5 Reviewer: Vanya Vasa Signed
Sorry... I thought Tyler was a girl.. I know better now. I like the way you are building the characters without concerning yourself about the frills....

Author's Response: Thanks. I'm kinda trying to have each chapter from one of the cousin's point of views. next chapter will be up soon.
Date: 04/12/06 - 04:41 pm [Report This]
Title: 3 Reviewer: Vanya Vasa Signed
Ok you clarified the characters. No you're not moving too fast, things are picking up quite nicely... Onto the next chapter...
Date: 04/12/06 - 04:30 pm [Report This]
Title: 2 Reviewer: Vanya Vasa Signed
Here's the review you asked for. This is a good story but you need to clarify the characters and thier relationships more, Who is tyler? What is she like?
Date: 04/12/06 - 04:20 pm [Report This]
Title: 1 Reviewer: Vanya Vasa Signed
Its an interesting beginning on a story... as long as you keep up the quality I won't mind reviewing it for you...
Date: 04/12/06 - 04:09 pm [Report This]
Title: 1 Reviewer: Gemini_Elf Signed
What happened to your other fic? This is good! Write more!

Author's Response: I'm putting up another one as well actually. an ElladanOC..hehe. Horizon needs some revision before it's gonna be up again.
Date: 27/11/06 - 08:44 am [Report This]
Title: 3 Reviewer: The Dragon Signed
Lucky, lucky Dragon! I found this story today and already I have an update (please write more soon - I want to know what happens!)
Date: 26/11/06 - 10:41 am [Report This]
Title: 2 Reviewer: Ranger Signed
Yay... since you are eternally grateful... hmm... clean my room! bwah ha ha...

Just kidding. :) Nice chapter, I'm glad Aragorn, Legolas, and Gandalf are here... can't wait 'til you update!

Author's Response: I'll update today probably. thanks for the review
Date: 26/11/06 - 08:51 am [Report This]
Title: 2 Reviewer: The Dragon Signed
Hmm - be interesting to see how this one pans out! I hope Jasmine starts to interact with her family again soon - otherwise she is going to end up very lonely!

Author's Response: you never know thanks for the review. next chapter will be up very shortly.
Date: 26/11/06 - 08:49 am [Report This]
Title: 1 Reviewer: KimberlyJane Signed
Ah! I like it I like it I like it!
Keep it up!
Date: 25/11/06 - 04:32 pm [Report This]
Title: 1 Reviewer: Ranger Signed would be cool if it was someone for the fellowship. But from the summary I wouldn't guess so... Can't wait, please update soon!

Author's Response: I'm already working out ideas for the chapters. thanks for the review. and about the fellowship'll have to wait and see.
Date: 25/11/06 - 04:17 pm [Report This]
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