I think that this is a really great song. And since I assume this is a real life situation, I am sorry you have to go through that. But mostly I like the song.
Author's Response: Yeah, it's a real life situation, and it sucks, but I'll survive through it. (somehow, lol!) I'm glad you liked it, and thanks for the review!!! ~Mel
Wow... I knew this girl like that her name was Brandi... and then another girl my best friend ever went and said some weird stuff and now our friendship is falling apart... I love this poem it's awesome and true!
Author's Response: Thanks. Some people can be jerks eh? ~Mel
well, thats some people alright! I wouldn't get to close to that type!
Good song :)
There was only one thing. Be and Me, Kind and Mind rhyme, but the rest of the end words don't. I do not know whether this was intended or not.
Author's Response: I try to stay away from them, but they follow me!!! And no, I didn't intend to make all of them rhyme. I just write it from the heart and don't bother making it rhyme. I suck at that anyways! Thanks for reviewing!!! ~Mel
Is this about . . . "you-know-who"?
Anyways, loved it!
Author's Response: Lol! At first, I though you were talking about Voldemort!!! haha! Actually, it's not about the other "you-know-who" but about a girl in my class. You know, typical popular prep, thinks she's all that, has a boyfriend, also happens to tease me. Thanks for the review!!! ~Mel