It was like stepping back in time when i read this. All through grade 1 i had no friends. i still get bullied but i don't give a nazgul's neck (if they have one). I just wish i could write something like that. Congrats
Author's Response: I'm glad you like my work and that you understand the meaning behind it. Thanks for the review! ~Mel
This poem certainly doesn't suck. Its very good and very well written. Keep it up! x
Author's Response: Thank you! I plan on writing more poems like this...I was teased again today...I thought it was over! (Damn-snotty-brats-who-think-their-the-best) Thanks for reviewing! ~Mel
That was really beautiful. It was very well-written, and I can relate to the message. You did a great job capturing those emotions.
Author's Response: Thanks! This is how I felt personally for a number of years. I wrote this to tell others what such a life is like. I don't mean a little tease here or there...I mean feeling horrible every day. Thanks for reviewing! ~Mel PS: I hope you aren't feeling the way this song depicts...