I hope you continue with this series if you do another part. If a second piece to the story is written I will be reading it soon.
You have a talent that not many have - you keep the reader wanting more. Keep upo the fantastic work.
Oh wow! This was an excellent chapter! I'm so sorry for not reading this in a while. But I've been kind of busy. I promise to read as much as I can, though. ~God bless
Author's Response: hey that's Ok. I understand- I have been busy myself. Alot of this is pre-written, I'm just in the process of moving it off of my old fan-fic site. They deleted my account for reasons I do not understand.
I just found this story today and I am thouroughly enjoying it! More soon please :-)
Author's Response: Thank you! I have about five more chapters on file of this one, then I have to write some more. I am really glad you like it!
Hmmm, A bit mary-sue-ish don't you think?
But other than that not half-bad.
Writeing is how we talk to our subcontsinesses
Author's Response: Not really intended to be a mary sue. Its just what I would have tried to do if I were there. Good point. Colleen is me... or how I wish I was... whatever. Its my first story.