This is a great scene, you wrote it really well. Good job bodo!
Yun

Author's Response: Merci!

As I read it at first I thought it was a soldier talking to Gandalf, but then it dawned on me. Excellent way to fill in the scenes we didn't see in the movie! And I have to say that I like your writing style - the descriptions are very lively. :) There are a couple of typos that I think should be corrected, but nothing all that big.

Good work. :)

Author's Response: Oh, thanks, but sorry about the typos. I didn't have time to get it beta read! Thanks for the comments.

oh i liked this. i love the conversation between the two civilians in the first part.

Author's Response: thanks! I might add to it later if I feel it needs more!