Very good! Humorous too, the way it connects with the first chapter! I love to think of Frodo as being a faunt; it's so cute, and gathering from your pen-name and subjects of writing, you like Hobbits too! Way to go! -
Author's Response: You will n ot find me write anything other than hobbits :) Unless, of course, it is hobbits interacting with Elves, Dwarves, Men... whatever :) I agree, Frodo must have been a really cute faunt :)
I love this story. Most people concentrate on elves, or the Valar, or Men. I like the sweet simplicity of your stories with the hobbits and thier ways. I think Professor Tolkien would have liked them too.
Author's Response: Thanks a lot. I rather stick to the hobbits and their simple ways. The Elves are far too unreachable for me.