Well, what to say? That is definitely one of the best opening chapters I have ever read. I usually only read real person fic and romance at that but this caught my eye and I'm so glad it did!
Really it is perfect, beautifully written, informative, intersting and gripping. I hope you decide to continue it one day.
Wow this is a really good story. I always love it when authors explore into - to my knoweledge - uncharted territory. It's really fun for a reader to read. Keep up the great work!
Author's Response: Thanks, LadyofLight! :D I love to explore into uncharted territory as well, with slight backup from the Professor himself!