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That was great. I'm really not that big a fan if hobbits but this was really good. i like it a lot, keep writing. I think that it was really good that you kept your chapters from rolling on and on or else some of your potential readers would mark it off as too long, it was a very good thing that you didn't. Thank you for writing this, i had a fun time reading,
-Syril
Author's Response: Thanks Syril! Oh, I will definitely keep writing. ;)
ee, how good of an almost ending!
Awww, that's so sweet.
Ah, a very nice solution, in a mimic of the Actual destroying of the One Ring. I liked it. At least it's gone now.
Author's Response: Thanks Syril! I've actually had this image in my head since I started writing Nine for Mortal Men. I didn't use it in that story, and I liked the way the destruction of the Nine turned out, but I couldn't get the image out of my mind. So I had to put it in another story of course! lol
Ahh, dandilions are sooo troublesome. i hope they have fun.
The cow part was nice
Author's Response: Syril, thanks for all the reviews, I see you've been reading a lot this weekend! lol. I hope you like the grand finale.
I think Sam is mean.
I like this, how you've turned a usually female issue around to a male. very interesting.
AHHH! yay, gythia, you worked in separation/divorce! great job. this is turning out really well.
Egads!
Pippin, he must come back!
I like this, it's fun, very fast.
Aww, how sweet. i like how you're including and comparing the relationships between the children and Merry and Pippin. good job!
Author's Response: Thanks Syril!
Ahh, that was beautiful!
Author's Response: Thanks Syril! Hope you like future chapters too!