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Reviewer: bodobodot1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19/07/06 - 07:58 am Title: The Girl

I read this and enjoyed it, although I would make a suggestion that you break it up into more sizable paragraphs so it doesnt put some readers off.

If you do that, your story will look nicer, and more will R&R!

Good work !

Author's Response: Thanks, I'll work on that.

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