You must login (register) to review.
Reviewer: Sharpe_and_Harper Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/01/08 - 10:15 pm Title: The Beginning

This was wonderful! I'm going to add this one to my favorites! ~God bless

Reviewer: tinara Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/04/06 - 03:03 pm Title: Elwing

Hi! Well, at least this is a good breaking point for the story, as I know everybody safe for the time. So, good luck for your surgery and until september! Tinara

Reviewer: tinara Signed [Report This]
Date: 17/12/05 - 11:18 pm Title: Days of Peace (Part 1)

Hi! Well, another great chapter. It´s wonderful that Eruanna is making friends. Does she still play with Earendil or has he found other playmates? Will Laiqualasse continue her fighting lessons? I´m sure she will will need them in later times. I´m waiting for the next chapter, so please update soon. Tinara

Reviewer: tinara Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/12/05 - 07:33 pm Title: The Teacher

Hi! Just again a great chapter. The way you describe the elves is wonderful, because you give them greatness and wisdom. Please update soon! Tinara

Reviewer: tinara Signed [Report This]
Date: 30/11/05 - 04:58 pm Title: Trust

Hi! It seems as if Lord Gilmir wii cause some trouble in future with his dilike of Eruanna, but I hope this won´t have dire consequences. I guess (and hope!) she will get to know more elves and Laiqualasse better when the company arrives at the sea.? Update soon! Tinara

Reviewer: tinara Signed [Report This]
Date: 27/11/05 - 07:04 pm Title: A Chance to Gain Trust

Hi! I think you´ve done an excellent job with this chapter, describing realistically how one would feel waking up in middle-earth! It´s refreshing to read such a good story with a human character and to be able to "feel" his motives and actions. Keep up writing! Tinara

Reviewer: tinara Signed [Report This]
Date: 24/11/05 - 10:22 am Title: The Beginning

Hi! I really like the style and your way of introducing the character. I hope for the next chapter soon! Tinara

You must login (register) to review.