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This chapter is very elegantly written, and I especially like Eowyn's last line.
I love this story! It was so beautifully written that it almost made me cry! I am a huge fan of Merry, so it was nice to see a story about him.
Never mind about the "..." thing. I just found out that's a sitewide problem. Ignore me!
That was astonishingly beautiful. I can't believe you got such elegance of language and such moving emotion out of such short installments, but it was absolutely perfect.
That is so bloody poignant. Wow.
Love the song. Very poetic. And although I don't know either of the tunes you suggest, it's written with enough of a beat that I can almost hear one.
Oh wow, beautiful imagery with the walls and the breaking and rebduilding. Fantastic.
Also, love the irony.
Pretty start, but you ought to check your formatting. Because of whatever program you loaded from, the accent over Eowyn's name makes it show up as "...owyn." Whoops! :P
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