Hee hee! Very nice, very nice. I'm sure it was the best--and certainly sweetest!--the poor old Watcher has had in ages. And I'll bet the Fellowship is thinking of that slimy tentacled creature far more fondly now...lol
Very nice poem. Entertaining and well written. Seventh stanza, though, do you mean "with insanity lost" or "with sanity lost"? Just checking, just in case... Anyway, excellent little bit of "Lay of Mary's End" from you! Loved the phrasing. Good job!
Author's Response: Thanks! : ) In the seventh stanza, I meant sanity lost. :) I'll have to check to make sure I wrote that the right way . :)