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Date: Nov 12 2015 01:36 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter One Reviewer: Mistress of Buckland Signed
Great story! The twin is kinda unnesessary though... is she important later?
Date: Oct 18 2012 03:00 am [Report This]
Title: Epilogue Reviewer: regaliaria Anonymous
This story was very good. I love a happy ending. I liked the way things turned out too. Denethor being a good father. Boromier still alive! And Eomer married to a more than a modern commoner. Although I see nothing common about her. She was a gift to Middle Earth and was glad the Valar had already seen that. And you know what who cares about what the other site did. Always remember you were here first and your story ia an a original because you wrote it your way. This is fantasy after all and you can write it any way you want! Very good job, and hope to see the seque. Email me if you do at
Date: Sep 02 2008 11:42 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter One Reviewer: meerkatalex Signed
A few grammatical errors, but this is a good AU story. I love it that she isn't a typical girl: "Oh my God he is so cute!" part made me smile. Carry on writing; don't scrap it!
Date: Aug 05 2008 03:12 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter Seventeen Reviewer: Kavaii Signed
Hey there! I've been a-readin' your story, and being a bit of a writer myself, I thought I'd offer my two cents. I hope you don't take offense at what I say- some cannot distinguish between criticism and bashing, and I mean not to bash you, but to help.

First of all, I loved the premise of the story. Being in the child care industry myself, I found the idea of hyperactive children from our time running around in Middle Earth hilarious.

However, it sort of felt like the idea was underdeveloped. No ideas in particular come to mind of how you could have done this, but I felt sort of felt like there could have been more. Perhaps more torture of the Fellowship? Ianno.

Another idea that sort of felt a little underdeveloped was the arrival of Natasha's sisters. You didn't really take this to the places it could have gone- her sisters could have helped to define Natasha's character better, and while they had started this process, it felt like it was unfinished. The whole bit with the sisters felt really abrupt.

On the love story with Eomer- I applaud you! Very few people venture past the typical love interests in LOTR, so this was a very refreshing turn. I loved it. =)

Also, the friendship with Eowyn was well done. Eowyn was wonderful in bringing out the good and bad in Natasha, saving her from Mary Sue-dom.

However, I didn't understand why Borimir and his father were not dead in this story. Now, I loved Boromir's character in LOTR, and you did a good job with the character, but I didn't quite understand why he was alive. Was it because Natasha's presence had caused a riff in the time line? Why didn't Natasha ever question his alive-ness if she was familiar with the story?

As for the overall writing of the story- you can write a good story, but it sort of lacked description. It seemed to read almost as a first person news report of what had happened.

Now, that's not necessarily bad- look at The Phantom of the Opera. The original book was written in this fashion, and look at all that came from it!

But, when one writes like this, it's harder for the reader to become emotionally involved.

I loved your story, so please, keep up the good work! =)
Date: Dec 22 2006 02:06 am [Report This]
Title: Epilogue Reviewer: elfenears Signed
this was such a nice story sequel please
Date: Dec 21 2006 08:36 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter Seven Reviewer: Silmarien Signed
ok first Boromir DIES! if your going to do a story like this try and keep to wat Tolkien wrote as close as you can.... im sorry im really obsessed with LOTR and everything Tolkien and can get kind of fanatical about it but still Boromir DIES! at Rauros Falls second the story is actually quite good...
Date: Nov 07 2006 06:54 pm [Report This]
Title: Epilogue Reviewer: Bein_Fuin Anonymous
Now, that was what I call a memorable story. Keep it up! Brilliant work! x
Date: Sep 23 2006 06:04 am [Report This]
Title: Epilogue Reviewer: Elaura Signed
Fantastic! But what happened to Sarah, Alice and Bella? I know Bella was there, but if Natasha died . . . and again, Gandalf fled before sending Alice and Sarah back, didn't he?
Date: Jul 31 2006 09:11 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter Three Reviewer: Elaura Signed
very clever so far. Nice change of pace. You are obviously writing from personal experience of some kind.
Date: Jul 31 2006 05:53 am [Report This]
Title: Epilogue Reviewer: Tamsytiggy Signed
Wow! That was so amazingly good! Yoo should keep on writing.
Date: Sep 29 2005 10:26 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter Fifteen Reviewer: Tamsytiggy Signed
Yay! Eomer likes her! Alot!
Date: Sep 29 2005 09:46 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter Fourteen Reviewer: Tamsytiggy Signed
Yay! Eomer has come back! WOOT!
Date: Sep 29 2005 09:32 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter Nine Reviewer: Tamsytiggy Signed
WOW! So good. I'm glad Eomer is getting a chance to fall for someone. He doesn't get the chance often.
Date: Sep 29 2005 08:56 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter Eight Reviewer: Tamsytiggy Signed
Yes! Finally, a story where Eomer could be interessted in the main character! Great story! Love it.
Date: Sep 29 2005 08:43 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter One Reviewer: Camilla Sandman Signed
Well, certainly a new twist on the whole "falling-into-ME" plot. Be curious to see if you can keep it different still and not fall into the many cliches of that particular plot. And I don't quite see the Fellowship allowing children to come along beyond Lothlorien. Would take quite a lot of resources and the lands were not exactly safe. Spelling and grammar is all right. A plus ;)
Date: Jan 29 2005 09:18 pm [Report This]
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