I don't usually like the Fellowship-as-children genre, but this is charming. I liked your foreshadowing to events of LotR, and I like your use of words, eg, "the future oliphaunt-slayer of Mirkwood scampered".

Author's Response: Haha, I'm so glad! Thank you!

that was really cute...i liked it...

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!