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This shows Legolas' pain beautifully, and reflects the pain of all the Firstborn. Wonderful- excellent work. :)
nice story, quite short but very thought provoking and well written!
This was really good. You have a great writing style, and the whole vignette seemed completely in place with the books/movies. love it!
Beautiful, and terribly thought-provoking. It seems just like Pippin to ask, and how Legolas answers is lovely. I like it!
meerkatalex
I like it. It gives an interesting point of view not often portrayed in other sories. Keep writing!
beautiful story!
not bad
Legolas' feelings are believable and very touching. I could feel and understand his pain. Also, the explanation of why Elves speak in riddles is clever. A very enjoyable lecture.
That was a beautiful story! You are an excellent writer. You captured Legolas' personality perfectly, I can easily imagine him thinking and feeling like that. Well done!
I liked this very sweet but self explanetory,lol dont mind my spelling
Sniff sniff... poor Legolas. I understand his point of view all too well. Great Story, I like it a lot.
Hmmm... this will help me with my own story an its very well written !
It's so sad. But it explains a lot of immortality. I agree with Legolas's thoughts of it completly. though you might try to tell the blessing of it more.
Short and simple, yet does very well at capturing the spirit of the characters. Good job!