Ha! I've had a X-Men/LOTR crossover story idea in my head forever! Well...not using any of the characters from X-men, just the concept of mutants in our world and them some how ending up in ME. Anyway, I hope you update soon!
Interesting, and I liked it, but one note: you absolutely cannot go from third person Point of View and randomly inject yourself into the story by saying stuff like "Now, I'm not talking one of those..." etc. It's extremely distracting, and doesn't make sense either. Why would the author be saying this anyway? You could just as easily say: "It wasn't just one of those..." etc.
I like your story I have been a fan of the Xmen for a long time and to see them mix with the awesome characters of the Lord of the Rings well it is just too cool! :D I am not sure if your even on this page or still writing this story I just wanted to tell you ı liked it ... xoxo AnchorJIM
YOU NEED TO UPDATE! YOU HAVNT UPDATED IN LIKE A YEAR! UPDATE! PLEASE! I MUST KNOW WHAT HAPPENDS NEXT!
i really like this story its cool!and um i think its cool that you made the rivendell elves have black hair but their hair color is really dark brown are light brown , but i think its cool what you did so keep up the good strory and yeah i m a major legolas fan as well so yeah but its cool how he has a thing for her b/c normally the real legolas in the books isnt some one to fall inlove he says he never wants to marry are fall in love , but its cool so plesee update reall soon , I MIUST SEE WHAT WILL HAPPENs! and yeah magneto and gandalf , lol both are ian mclellen same person , i think thats funny! well bye