I love the tension and the excitement. Can't wait for an update.
A/N are a little bit distracting in the middle of a chapter. There were also a few errors but nothing major; more along the lines of a few missed commas.
*impatiently waits for a new chapter*
I was a little sceptical when I began reading this. Oh how the mighty fall. Your writing really grabbed me from the beginning. Well written, good descriptions.
I love Sailor Moon and a LotR/SM crossover is pretty original.
However, I have a little suggestion. Not all know the background story of Sailor Moon or indeed who or what she is. You covered the basics very well in the story but I think a bit more information would be useful.
IPerhaps something along the lines of an introduction? Something separate from the story, I mean. I realize that this creates additional work for you but I really think the story would benefit from it.