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Reviewer: Silmaril Signed [Report This]
Date: 18/01/14 - 02:18 am Title: Chapter 1

Interesting! I thought you did a good job of recreating the way in which Gollum spoke. However, The story is just a bunch of random lines...in fact, it doesn't really tell a story. It's a few random thoughts in Gollum's head. Next time, try making it connect more and give it some more depth. But overall, this was a joy to read!!! :D

Reviewer: gracie baggins ilovelotr Signed [Report This]
Date: 20/06/13 - 05:47 pm Title: Chapter 1

hey emily! you wrote this right? awesome! this is the perfect story for you to be writing

Author's Response: who's emily?

Reviewer: calatheil Signed [Report This]
Date: 18/06/13 - 06:50 pm Title: Chapter 1

This is really good! I felt sorry for him, keep up the good work! :D

Author's Response: thank you very much! I didn't know my story was that good

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