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Reviewer: Sharpe_and_Harper Signed [Report This]
Date: 21/02/13 - 07:06 pm Title: Prologue

Your profile says that English is not your first language, but I would never have guessed. Your writing is beautiful! I love your descriptions; I feel as if I am right there with her. You write in such a way that the reader can picture everything, and I really like that. Well done. :)

Author's Response: Ahh, that's so sweet :) I've been practising for over a year now and I'm proud of what I've achieved so far :D When I'm writing the scenes come to life in my head and I try my best to translate that on paper... it's the writers job to take the reader on a journey, right? ;) (I'm typing this on my phone.. So no spellcheck)

Reviewer: EnchantessM Signed [Report This]
Date: 21/02/13 - 06:25 am Title: Chapter 2

May I offer a couple of corrections?
As you can imagine, the elves have different gender names than humans.
Female elf: elleth
Males elf: ellon.
It just throws me off whenever you refer to the ellons and elleths as men and women. I don't know, maybe it's just me. :)

Other than that, they story is quite good, and I'm curious to read where you'll take us.

Author's Response: Oh shoot, how could I forget that .. I know that they have different gender names, but as I was writing I totally forgot .. I'll fix it and from now on I'll use the correct term ;) Thanks for pointing it out

Reviewer: calatheil Signed [Report This]
Date: 20/02/13 - 11:57 pm Title: Chapter 2

This gets more and more exiting with every chapter!!! Keep it up, I look forward to reading the rest. :D

Author's Response: :D thank you .. I wasn't sure about this chapter.The next one is going to be a great one ;)

Reviewer: calatheil Signed [Report This]
Date: 17/02/13 - 10:18 pm Title: Prologue

This is Great, I love it!!

Author's Response: Thank you!

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