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Reviewer: MrEnterprise Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/03/13 - 03:02 am Title: Chapter 1

Great emotion.
I can feel it, the pain.

Author's Response: Deep. Very deep, babe. I can see it, the cheese. XD

Reviewer: calatheil Signed [Report This]
Date: 26/09/12 - 01:55 am Title: Chapter 1

This is brilliant, i wish we did things like this in drama, you are such an amazing writer :)



Author's Response: Why thank ye fair lady! I was actually surprised when I got an A on it + extra credit for memorization.

Reviewer: Tricksy Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/09/12 - 03:28 am Title: Chapter 1

How well laid out and sad. I never knew my father but I have grown similarly distant from some that I have loved. So on that level I suppose I can vaguely relate. I will not say I can understand but I do sympathize.

Author's Response: It really sucks sometimes. But I read it out loud to my class, everyone thought I was gonna cry. But like the awesome bastard I am, it was part of the act. I did give my father the monologue, but I haven't gotten a response from him yet. Oh well.

Reviewer: Erato Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/09/12 - 01:22 am Title: Chapter 1

It's none of my business, but I think that mabe you should tell that to you'r father. Or you could just let bin See what you wrote. You did a good job with it by the way... :)

Author's Response: Well my dear. Easier said than done I'm afraid. But I appreciate the concern and thank you.

Reviewer: Elbereth Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/09/12 - 04:39 pm Title: Chapter 1

I can also empathise with you here. I'm sorry. :(

However, it was beautifully written and really touched me- now officially added to my favourites.

Author's Response: It's nice to know that someone outside of the "circle" can relate to this. It's kinda hard to bring up sometimes. But thank you for reviewing, and I'm happy that you took the time to favorite.

Reviewer: EnchantessM Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/09/12 - 07:48 am Title: Chapter 1

~sigh~
In so many ways, this also describes the relationship of my dad and I. :(

Author's Response: I think it definitely embodies the relationship between a daughter and father. Growing up is hard, and sometimes, dad's can't take it. Thanks for the review.

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