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Title: Chapter 26: Shattered Reviewer: kat_and_erin Signed
Wait! What happened to Boromir?!

Author's Response: ...oops. I'm sorry. It'll explain. I promise.
Date: 10/01/15 09:58 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 21: First Day At Beth's Reviewer: Nostariel Signed
This is "fudging" amazing! I hope you write more soon!

Author's Response: Thank you very much :) I'm working on the next chapter as soon as I can
Date: 03/24/13 11:17 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 21: First Day At Beth's Reviewer: MrEnterprise Signed
The plot thickens.
Figures Boromir wouldnt know to wrap it up. And Cory was that desperate.
Date: 03/06/13 06:38 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 19: Let The Games Begin Reviewer: MrEnterprise Signed
Thriller vibe is really hitting.
Date: 03/06/13 06:33 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 16: Case Re-Opened Reviewer: MrEnterprise Signed
The plot with the Donnelly case is a welcome change of pace. And its nice to know Cory is smiling.
Date: 03/06/13 06:23 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 14: Reconciliation Is An Understatement Reviewer: MrEnterprise Signed
Bout time.
Date: 03/06/13 06:17 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 12: The Book Reviewer: MrEnterprise Signed
I was waiting for this moment.
Date: 03/06/13 06:08 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 11: Lost And Found, Then Lost Again Reviewer: MrEnterprise Signed
Date: 03/06/13 06:05 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 10: A Sick Form Of Foreplay Reviewer: MrEnterprise Signed
So romantic...
Date: 03/06/13 06:02 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 9: One Big Scary Spark Reviewer: MrEnterprise Signed
Choice of movies is immactulate. Watching the relationship grow is pleasant. Good piece.
Date: 03/06/13 05:57 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 8: Montpelier Reviewer: MrEnterprise Signed
Holy Shnike. The stimulation of the dream, ending in the rage, leaving Cory slick and SOL...
Well done.
Date: 03/06/13 05:49 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 7: Why Cory Must Do Everything Reviewer: MrEnterprise Signed
The part about Cory's double personality is important. Cant say why.
But the Love Actually reference is deeply appreciated,
and i would /hate/ to be Boromir...
Date: 03/06/13 05:43 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 6: TGIF, But It Ain't Friday Reviewer: MrEnterprise Signed
Beth is a great character, the depth you put in this chapter is a great addition to the repetiore.
And again, with the kids. so damn cute.
Date: 03/06/13 05:34 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 5: Gotta Love Family Reviewer: MrEnterprise Signed
The story of her fiancee and its effect on her really hits home, very believable.
And the both of them with the children, the connection is felt, a very touching moment.
Date: 03/06/13 05:28 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 3: Nothing On This Guy Reviewer: MrEnterprise Signed
When Boromir tells his birthdate the second time, it should include 'of the Third Age' if he saw how bewildered cory was. Just a thought. But again. Dialog doesnt miss a beat.
Date: 03/06/13 05:12 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 2: Wide Awake Reviewer: MrEnterprise Signed
Great piece. Cory has heart.
Date: 03/06/13 04:59 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: An Unwanted Call Reviewer: MrEnterprise Signed
The progression from the other story I read to this one is evident. Much more sophisticated writing style, very well done.
Date: 03/06/13 04:51 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 20: The Lake House(Not The Movie) Reviewer: Erato Signed
It was short, but good. When is the next chapter up?

Author's Response: I know! I feel so bad that it's so short! I'm trying to write the next chapter up ASAP. Thanks for reviewing.
Date: 09/27/12 01:46 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 19: Let The Games Begin Reviewer: Erato Signed
Ok, Interesting... can't wait to see what happens next! Wonderfuly written as allways!!!
Date: 09/22/12 03:09 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 18: A Different Sort Of Punishment Reviewer: EnchantessM Signed
Nothing wrong with kink every now-and again. :P
Date: 09/14/12 09:25 pm [Report This]
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