this is a great story, i love the battle scene, it really brings out Tauriel's personality, keep up the good work :D
Author's Response: Thanks!! And thank you so much for reviewing! I was just about to take this story down and merge the good chapters that i had written for later with another story. But hope has been restored!
I didn't realise at first she was elvish (or half-elvish). Lucky she's so handy in battle. Not so lucky for her foes, though ...
The elves language is very contemporary here, and they swear a lot, both of which are a little distracting. I suppose battle can harden one that way. Still, perhaps if their language was tempered a little so it was more appropriate to their kind?
Keep on writing! And thanks for the tip on the new 'Hobbit' trailer! I've been watching it on a loop for two days. Am now a pervy Dwarf-fancier ...
Its nice to see a story with new characters showing up, i guess your tauriel is going to blend with peter jacksons new elven lady character?? it has some nice discriptions and speech but is screaming and throwing flowerpots very elven? i will keep reading to see what happens, thanks for writing and posting!!
Author's Response: I guess it isnt't, but Tauriel can be very hot headed at times. She will have the same qualities as Peter Jackson's Tauriel, but she won't follow the same story. Thanks so much for reviewing, it's great to know people like it! I will probably update on Friday as I have exams for the next three days :(
Wow! That was quick ;) ! Awww Horphen is like the big brother everyone whishes they had
Author's Response: Thanks. Pity I cant update until after our stupid exams, but I have to work. Yh I wish Horphen was my big brother :(