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Title: Chapter 10 beaten and bruised Reviewer: Erato Signed
Hopefully she managed to take Paul down!
and where the hell is Eomer?

Author's Response: She friggin murdered him. Don't worry Eomer will come to the rescue
Date: 04/09/12 02:43 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 10 beaten and bruised Reviewer: Erato Signed
Intresting...the orcs are probably thinking that she has gone completely crazy...XD

Author's Response: That's the point but Korruk finds interesting not scary or mentally unstable
Date: 04/09/12 01:28 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 spells of old Reviewer: Irial Signed
Oh no, don't be sorry! Like I said your concept is great, just needs a few structure and grammer pick ups to make it easier to read! Otherwise it's great. We are all new at this at some point and I found that advice from fellow authors and readers helped me along the way! My tales used to be a right mess don't worry! With practice it'll become easier! Keep going! ~ Iri

Author's Response: Aww so sweet. But chapter nine is gonna be great
Date: 04/09/12 12:19 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 9 songs and poems Reviewer: Erato Signed
Love it! Very poetic! XO

Author's Response: It helps write the story XD
Date: 04/08/12 09:17 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 spells of old Reviewer: Irial Signed
I'm with Melda - definitely more descriptions and a more easy-to-read layout would benefit this tale. I like the concept definitely but it's just a little hard to read. ~ Iri

Author's Response: Sorry I'm still new at this
Date: 04/08/12 03:12 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 8 memories Reviewer: Erato Signed
Love it! XD
Date: 04/07/12 10:37 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 8 memories Reviewer: Erato Signed
Hey! Where is the rest?!! XD
Great chapter! XD

and thank you for posting up! :)
Date: 04/07/12 09:21 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 6 stares and truths Reviewer: Erato Signed
That was an interesting twist in the story! Just please,try to make the chapters longer.
Canīt wait to see whatīs going to happen next! XD

Author's Response: Aww thnx Ill keep writting till the sun don shine in middle earth no more
Date: 02/07/12 05:06 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 6 stares and truths Reviewer: Erato Signed
Nice! XD

Author's Response: thnx
Date: 02/07/12 02:23 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 spells of old Reviewer: Erato Signed
Great story!Just add more detail. Cand wait for the next chapter! XD

Author's Response: im trying its going about slowly
Date: 02/05/12 05:33 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 spells of old Reviewer: Melda Signed
The story has a good basic form, but you need to add more background and details as well as perhaps edit your pages a little more before you post. Or you could advertise for a beta, who would do that for you. Otherwise, it's pretty good.

Author's Response: thnx for the critizism
Date: 02/02/12 01:44 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 2 Jokes and truth Reviewer: Merciful_Faelwen Signed
Nice

Author's Response: Thnx
Date: 01/31/12 03:20 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 spells of old Reviewer: Merciful_Faelwen Signed
That was for future chaps, muh girl.

Author's Response: Nice
Date: 01/31/12 01:13 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 spells of old Reviewer: Merciful_Faelwen Signed
Make paragraphs longer add more paragraphs. More detail. I really should not be telling you this due to I suck and not that good.

Author's Response: Its only chapter one I had to get it started
Date: 01/31/12 12:51 am [Report This]
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