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Reviewer: Erato Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/04/12 - 06:43 am Title: Chapter 10 beaten and bruised

Hopefully she managed to take Paul down!
and where the hell is Eomer?

Author's Response: She friggin murdered him. Don't worry Eomer will come to the rescue

Reviewer: Erato Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/04/12 - 05:28 am Title: Chapter 10 beaten and bruised

Intresting...the orcs are probably thinking that she has gone completely crazy...XD

Author's Response: That's the point but Korruk finds interesting not scary or mentally unstable

Reviewer: Irial Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/04/12 - 04:19 am Title: Chapter 1 spells of old

Oh no, don't be sorry! Like I said your concept is great, just needs a few structure and grammer pick ups to make it easier to read! Otherwise it's great. We are all new at this at some point and I found that advice from fellow authors and readers helped me along the way! My tales used to be a right mess don't worry! With practice it'll become easier! Keep going! ~ Iri

Author's Response: Aww so sweet. But chapter nine is gonna be great

Reviewer: Erato Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/04/12 - 01:17 am Title: Chapter 9 songs and poems

Love it! Very poetic! XO

Author's Response: It helps write the story XD

Reviewer: Irial Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/04/12 - 07:12 am Title: Chapter 1 spells of old

I'm with Melda - definitely more descriptions and a more easy-to-read layout would benefit this tale. I like the concept definitely but it's just a little hard to read. ~ Iri

Author's Response: Sorry I'm still new at this

Reviewer: Erato Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/04/12 - 02:37 am Title: Chapter 8 memories

Love it! XD

Reviewer: Erato Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/04/12 - 01:21 am Title: Chapter 8 memories

Hey! Where is the rest?!! XD
Great chapter! XD

and thank you for posting up! :)

Reviewer: Erato Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/02/12 - 10:06 pm Title: Chapter 6 stares and truths

That was an interesting twist in the story! Just please,try to make the chapters longer.
Can´t wait to see what´s going to happen next! XD

Author's Response: Aww thnx Ill keep writting till the sun don shine in middle earth no more

Reviewer: Erato Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/02/12 - 07:23 am Title: Chapter 6 stares and truths

Nice! XD

Author's Response: thnx

Reviewer: Erato Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/02/12 - 10:33 pm Title: Chapter 1 spells of old

Great story!Just add more detail. Cand wait for the next chapter! XD

Author's Response: im trying its going about slowly

Reviewer: Melda Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/02/12 - 06:44 pm Title: Chapter 1 spells of old

The story has a good basic form, but you need to add more background and details as well as perhaps edit your pages a little more before you post. Or you could advertise for a beta, who would do that for you. Otherwise, it's pretty good.

Author's Response: thnx for the critizism

Reviewer: Merciful_Faelwen Signed [Report This]
Date: 31/01/12 - 08:20 am Title: Chapter 2 Jokes and truth

Nice

Author's Response: Thnx

Reviewer: Merciful_Faelwen Signed [Report This]
Date: 31/01/12 - 06:13 am Title: Chapter 1 spells of old

That was for future chaps, muh girl.

Author's Response: Nice

Reviewer: Merciful_Faelwen Signed [Report This]
Date: 31/01/12 - 05:51 am Title: Chapter 1 spells of old

Make paragraphs longer add more paragraphs. More detail. I really should not be telling you this due to I suck and not that good.

Author's Response: Its only chapter one I had to get it started

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