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Reviewer: FrodoLuver1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26/08/11 - 04:00 am Title: Chapter 1 Against the northern borders

Really good!!! LOved it! Write more! Hey can u check out my stuff no one's reviewed it at all and its making em think it sucks...

Reviewer: Gwaelinn Signed [Report This]
Date: 19/08/11 - 08:39 am Title: Chapter 1 Against the northern borders

Ack!! You can't stop there!! Hope for an update soon...very good start.
~G

Reviewer: delightfulmaiden Signed [Report This]
Date: 18/08/11 - 06:08 am Title: Chapter 1 Against the northern borders

This is a good story for being your first, but a word of advice. On some of your paragraphs they tend to run into other and no space there...Kind of confusing to read, but other than that...Well written Mellon...

Author's Response: Thank you for the advice :) I will fix the paragraphs and I'll also work on the clarity of the ideas in future stories!

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