"And to see and hear those wondrous things come from the mind of Manwe made the other Ainur feel as though they came from Eru himself..." - most awesome discription I've read of Manwe!
I am loving your vision of life for these spirits before time. It's breathtaking! And witnessing Melkor's spiral into Evil is too cool... I like detail that he could not yet lie! And his Bait, nice devious work. I was excited to see young Ungoliant. Will we get to see Sauron, perhaps...?
Keep it up! :)
Author's Response: Thanks Kitt! And yes, I do plan to write something about Melkor's initial encounter with Sauron. I'll keep you posted about it! :)
This is fascinating! And courageous too - to explore the motives of Melkor! You get into his head very well and your description of Nothingness vs Being within his brethren's thoughts is awesome. :) The Silm-esque writing style is fitting too. Thanks for sharing this!
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked this. I actually made it in a hurry! I'll come up with the next chapter soon.
I like this. It's very tolkienesque (if that's even a word) in the way its written. And its nice that characters that don't get as much attentions as others are being explored
Please update soon!! :)
Author's Response: Thanks Caunedhiel! This is actually my first attempt to write. I'll try to update as soon as I can!