Reviews For Silver Lining
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Reviewer: Gilraen999 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21/10/12 - 05:59 am Title: Birth

An excellent start to a story. I cannot wait to read more

Reviewer: iggybaby Signed [Report This]
Date: 16/02/11 - 11:59 am Title: Birth

Hee hee! "This is woman's work" I loved that line! I also think you portrayed the king's anxiety as a father and husband very well. I liked it! Keep writing! ~iggybaby

Author's Response: Haha thank you. I love Fantasy Midwives xD I am glad you think I am going well. Thanks for the review! ~Nessa

Reviewer: Karlmir Stonewain Signed [Report This]
Date: 14/02/11 - 01:24 pm Title: Birth

Awaste of time?! Heck, no! This is a good start. Please continue.

I have only one small criticism. In private, Arwen would address her husband as Estel, not Elessar.

Author's Response: *phew* thank you for your confidence! And thank you for catching that. It shall be attended to!

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