Hee hee! "This is woman's work" I loved that line! I also think you portrayed the king's anxiety as a father and husband very well. I liked it! Keep writing! ~iggybaby
Author's Response: Haha thank you. I love Fantasy Midwives xD I am glad you think I am going well. Thanks for the review! ~Nessa
Awaste of time?! Heck, no! This is a good start. Please continue.
I have only one small criticism. In private, Arwen would address her husband as Estel, not Elessar.
Author's Response: *phew* thank you for your confidence! And thank you for catching that. It shall be attended to!