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Reviewer: Anonymous Anna Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/02/12 - 07:45 pm Title: Chapter Two: Vegetable Surprise!

I'm shocked this doesn't have any reviews, but I guess I'll be the first. I rather like your story, I enjoy these little prequests and how a girl grows up befriending the four. Just so you know, there're a few mistakes, but nothing major.... except maybe the dog one. I'm not sure if you did it that on purpose or not, but Farmer Maggot has three dogs and they're not named Norvil. And Frodo would never hit an animal, you could have done this a little more smoothly without that. So maybe a little more research next time. Otherwise, I like your writing.

~Anna

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