I read the whole story! How sad..It's amazing though, you put so much feeling into what you write that it's flawless! I can't believe that no one has every reviewed this before me, though it is an honor unto me to have been the first!
Love and peanutbutter,
Author's Response: Thank you, dear! Well, it's actually been reviewed quite generously over at Faramirfiction.com where I'd initially posted it, so I don't feel unloved about this story :) I really can't predict which story will receive reviews at which site, though there must be some kind of logic to it...